All Comments on 'When in Rome'

Interesting start, love to read more in the slow(er) pace. Details in their fears, desires and shame would be great.

An excellent chapter. Michelle will be pregnant in no time! Amy x

Part 2 please

Five stars, very well written and a nice read, a few grammatical errors but nothing that detracted from the story.

Interesting.

It's interesting. I'm surprised the text wasn't checked with a grammar checker app before being submitted to Literotica. In my opinion, you don't need a VE because the storyline is coherent. Looking forward to Part 2.

A fun read. The descriptions of each member of the group were lovely and each ended up in the appropriate place.

Can we get a part2?

I’m very intrigued about being in this time period and with the characters being dealt with appropriately I could read this weather it has sex or not, but as you said when in Rome 😈

wow! a great story. Unrelenting submission! In no time all naked and serving.

An interesting take on the plot of "Lest Darkness Fall" by L. Sprague de Camp. However, it's a little rushed and in places seems more like an outline of a longer work than a finished story. Three stars.

An interesting take on the plot of "Lest Darkness Fall" by L. Sprague de Camp. However, it's a little rushed and in places seems more like an outline of a longer work than a finished story. Three stars.