All Comments on 'When in Rome... Pt. 01'

This was a very good but try translating some of the text cause it's kind of hard to understand Italian

but I don't speak Italian, so anything the girls said was completely lost on me, and probably most of the people who'll read this, so, as the other commentator said, perhaps a translation might have been in order. That's the only minor niggle I have with this otherwise well written, well-paced, sexy story. Definitely 5 stars.

I agree with the other commentators, a translation for the italian parts would be nice other than that it is a great story!!

... but neither does David, apparently, and he survived. Good job. Hot sister, redhead, with big tits. No translation necessary.

Love me a redhead. Unlike others, I enjoyed Googling the Italian parts. Peeps be lazy yo!

Making Ro a redheaded hottie was unexpected and you really built up their relationship slowly. Made sense she loved him at 15 and then finally decided to lose weight and impress. You didn't skimp on the sexual details, the buildup and orgasms, so you covered all your bases, something other authors don't always do. This is definitely a 5-star rate. :)

I hate folks who see ONE PHRASE, then race to the end to rate One Star. It's not fair to the author. That happened to me recently. It sucks. For what it's worth, this is a cute story. I read it with Google Translate open in another tab, so I could get the gist of the important Italian phrases. Inflated boobies do nothing for me. But I could appreciate the excitement of the character in the story, without you playing specifically to my fetishes, kinks and desires.

Gonna agree with GLS. Anon saw one phrase and had no clue what the rest of the story contained. Perhaps the guy liked big girls. Perhaps he grew to like the. Perhaps the sister shed weight (she did). This troll will never know because they zoomed to the end without seeing the context. Probably some chick who is north of not 2 but 300 herself. Hey if you do or don't like big girls, it's cool, but let the author finish his story before you decide. Imbecile!

I have to give you 5 Stars simply because it was damned well written.

You pushed all my buttons! Brother/Sister love, Redheads, Rome. I gave you a 5.

I loved every minute of it. With all of these stories I have read recently I seem to be finding the good ones lately. You did an excellent job writing this. I wish I was only half as talented as some of you here. I am thinking about giving it shot and writing one short story to see what others think. I actually liked the Italian. You had captured my interest enough to open google translate for those parts, which were not overly used. Nice work

Hot sexy and romantic! Loved it!

loved it want more

This quote sums it up best, "More please"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh damn, that was fun. You must give us more of David and Ro.

Most excellent, and descriptive writing my friend. A beautiful and well told story if ever there was one. I hope for more!

Great story. Nice build up, good description of the caracters and surroundings. Wuold love to read more about them.

gets angry when his wife is the one screwing the fellow employees, but has no problem doing it himself.

What the fuck?

Do you seriously think he was upset that his wife was fucking his fellow EMPLOYEES as opposed to fucking AROUND? Do you not see the difference between a divorced man sleeping around versus a married woman sleeping around?

great writing, and the story is super. keep on writing. i mean it, don't you ever quit writing. you were born to write.

@rightbank

Awesome comment......hilarious............what!!!!... You were serious......uh oh

When I visualize a girl with a boob job and a bald pussy, I see a porn star. Moreover she gave good head. It's hard to take your story seriously. (You DO write very well.)

Apparently Cassannette has a problem with the concept of fantasy. It is fiction, not fact, so get over it. As far as the other comment, that's YOUR problem. But the way, I'll be sure to tell my wife, who just happens to be packing DDs, shaves her pussy, and wears thongs, as well as giving a very good blowjob, that she must be a porn star, according to your expert opinion.

The author is obviously too sensitive and should shut off the option to comment.

Ilikeithot, love your stories. although some people like to tear others down to make themselves feel better dont let it get to you. I for one prefer c cups and bald or hairy pussies and i have seen both on porn stars so all women must be a porn star to me. As long as you please your wife or girlfriend that is what counts and she makes you happy even better. I enjoy reading stories fictional or fact and like seeing what other authors do to create the suspense and painted pictures of what is going on between two consenting adults to enrich their love lifes.... It is nice reading your stories because it is not a rehash of all the same things over and over and you change up the plots and characters unlike some authors.... thanks for some great reads.

Sounds like the beginning of a great story. Are you going to address the birth control issue... I hope so.

I, for one, would like them to have a life AND family together.

They are just not the same as real, in looks or feel. That and fat girls never really stay skinny. They may lose it for a while but once fat always fat and disgusting.

I can say some women can stay slim after being fat tor years and I loved this story

So this guy is trading in a life of many hot Italian sluts for his sister who sucked every dick in high school and then probably fucked every dick she found once she lost weight and got fake tits? Didn't expect her to be a pure virgin but didn't have to make her a self confessed whore either. Ok story so far but not feeling the story or characters

Great story, well worth 5/5

Thank God for Babelfish! I speak enough Spanish to be dangerous, but I don't consider myself bilingual or fluent in any way shape or form. Spanish and Italian are quite similar in many respects, but I still needed a translation application to make sense of what I was reading. In the end, it was really good. 👍

As for your description of taller men being proportional overall, I'm living proof of that theory. An ex girlfriend of mine would testify to the truth of that if she hadn't passed away from complications related to surgery. Her niece had a crush on me and had been very forward with Lilia about specific details of my body. Lilia and I had devolved from lovers into close friends so she had no problems sharing information. She actually encouraged her niece to pursue me and fed me information about her niece crushing on me to bring us together. What a wonderful woman! In one of our conversations, Lilia related to me that she answered an intimate enquiry by saying that I wasn't hung like a horse, but I was big because I was perfectly proportional. I was 6'8" tall and weighed 225 pounds at that time. So yeah, just as a general rule, bigger guys have bigger dicks. I miss Lilia terribly. I couldn't have ever loved her enough to marry her, but I did love her for more than just being my friend.

One last thing that I forgot to add. Another reader, Joshuad2477s, made comments about the story that I had to support. His perspective was dead on. But unlike him, I did get into the characters in spite of their obvious flaws. I was angry with David at the end because he was immediately going to dump his secretary just because his sister came on to him. It's like she was never anything more to him than a place to park his dick. That's extremely rude and callous. If this was someone real and not a fictional character, I would expect that Carolyn would eventually suffer a similar fate.

Fake boobs on a slut of a sister is trouble in the making. Big turn off. 3*

DAVID IS A MAN SLUT

STUPID DAVID FUCKING HIS SECRETARY.....DOES THE HORNY WIMP NOT KNOW THAT YOU DON'T EAT AND SHIT IN THE SAME PLACE!!

An old saying goes ' you're asking for trouble if you mix work and play,' playing with your secretary can lead to physical and emotional problems in your home and work life.

Informing your secretary that the person who has just interrupted the pair of you is also an opening for serious blackmail either fiscal, emotional or even work preference related.

I agree with the adage that when in Rome do as the Romans do, but he very careful as Italian law is far stricter than anywhere in the United States, life imprisonment for both parties.

Sono bono!!!!!! So good!!!!! Five star!!!!

Well that bigger dick didn't do much to stop his slut ex-wife fucking around on him did it, so how great could it be? It's more about what you do with it than the size (though admittedly you need at least something half-decent to work with).

What I wonder is that, in a situation like that, was it a case of the ex-wife going out of her way to cheat on him, or was it a case of she felt like she had no choice if she wanted to get ahead in her career? I know the latter is really just a testament to how fucked up things are in the workplace for a female in any case. I'm curious why there was no mention of her ever explaining things. You'd think that would be important enough to mention to us curious readers. I hate when there's cheating in stories that isn't really explained to the reader (like what were the reasons for it from the cheater's perspective). Mind you, I hate cheating in general, but since it's so common as a plot device in these kinds of stories, I at least expect some good explanation for it.

Pretty lame that you made his sister into some slut in high school that blew anything with a cock just because she was fat then presumably fucked a lot (catching up I guess) once she was skinny and attractive. But don't worry bro, I've always loved you, I'm YOUR slut now ;) Would have been more compelling on the romance front if she had been a lot more conservative.