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Samson_69Samson_69almost 4 years ago
A Note From Lance Leo

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mrdata9770mrdata9770over 2 years ago

(9/29/2921) Well, this was all about lance, wasn't it? Who was his stepfather, but most importantly who was Nicole since it was her POV? And was Jane just a ghost that popped in and out of a few paragraphs? I understand that Lance is Samson, the prime character in your Rubirosa series, but you are taking too much for granted, IMO. There needs to be much more than Lance to make a story a good read. You used a few words describing emotions but there was no emotion in this story, IMO. It was quite bland, IMO.

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Rubirosa is the authorized biographer of celebrity porn star Samson. The author is currently at work on Samson's million-word erotic memoir "C*ck Star." For more information about his full length novels, please visit https://tinyurl.com/yapcnuz5