All Comments on 'When Love Takes Over Ch. 01'

OMG! I love the way this story ended!)

I laughed so hard on that one. The military salute really did it though. I almost fell off my bed.

There is no better combination! Looking forward to the next chapters.

Sweet, funny, hot and entertaining. Loving it so far!

Greatly enjoyed reading this story in which I'm familiar with all the places mentioned.

And oh so familiar with the destruction of Katrina. Love, love, love New Orleans.

I'm wondering if this is a true story from FuzzyNOLA?

Thanks. Please more.................

The end had me laughing out loud. Good story, looking forward to the next instalment.

Tthank you so much for the comments and feedback. I have enjoyed reading at Nifty and Literotica for years, and I finally decided to take the plunge and write my own story. I am editing Chapter 2, and I plan to submit within the next day or so. I have the entire storyline plotted and outlined, but have to admit that the characters have not been in the pawns I thought they would be, and the story has evolved in unexpected ways as I try to move them on the chess board..

And as for Anonymous's question about whether the story is true or not: the short answer is yes and no. I have based the characters and situations on actual people and events, but I have taken many artistic liberties.

This was a good read. I enjoyed it greatly. The laugh at the end was perfect. Look forward to more.

TM

Just read this story, Mar 16, 2015. Where is chapter 2? I really liked this story and would like to read more. Thanks

I can't wait to see how this story develops. ^o^

And quite hot as the initial parting started. It's now mid-May and no chap 2. Please continue!

MORE!MORE,MORE!

I love the instant passion with these two....the ending was hilarious! I busted out laughing! Looking forward to the next installment. Well done!

Where y'at fuzzyNOLA!? You made me sweat and then laugh out loud. Great beginning.