All Comments on 'When My Heart Found Christmas'

by Bh76

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AngelRiderAngelRiderover 2 years ago

It was alright. You lost me with Greek God to be honest.

G5902G5902over 2 years ago

Thank You for sharing such a sweet and happy Christmas story!!!

CriosCriosover 2 years ago

Beautiful love at first sight story. Thanks!

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

Excellent Christmas love story! Best I've read in a long time. Very well written! I'd say it's worth 10 stars but have to settle for 5 BIG STARS! And a thank you. Merry Christmas Everyone! Merry Christmas Bh76.

alexetlaurealexetlaureover 2 years ago

Very passionate and romantic story, 5 stars

muskyboymuskyboyover 2 years ago

TOTALLY got my vote!

mac1729mac1729over 2 years ago

What wonderful romance story for Christmas. Thank you

6King6Kingover 2 years ago

NICE! * * * * *

wapentakewapentakeover 2 years ago

An excellent, heart warming, and well written 5 star story.

A very merry Christmas to all!

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyover 2 years ago

So sweet. Very nice story. Thanks

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 2 years ago

Sweet little Romance Story, I loved it.

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just an observation: Dex Sr. is an anagram of Dr. Sex.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 2 years ago

Enjoyable tale. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Sorry I didn’t see this at Christmas, but then I like Christmas all year long.

5*

Tc

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

OMG. How many times do we have to read about some girl falling for the chiseled guy with the six pack abs? BORING 😴 😴 😴! Oh yeah, I forgot that it's the biggest lie that every woman tells, "Looks don't matter". Well at least we can say that your story is very factual. Except for Dex...

You see, here's the ugly truth that no one ever talks about. The "Adonis" type guys like Dex already know that women are going to throw themselves at their feet. So there's not a single one of them who will treat a girl with dignity and respect, unless they're going through the motions in order to 'set the hook' or impress the parents. 🤔 But as soon as they get what they want, then the real beast will make its appearance.

Nice guys always finish last. Just like they weren't present in your story either. Next time please write about an actual believable character. 1/5

drycreeksdrycreeksover 1 year ago

So much potential nice story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Start was way too fast, as was the ending.

NitpicNitpicover 1 year ago
Makings

Makings of a decent story.Pity it was cut short.

Pjam1968Pjam1968about 1 year ago

Damn, a very straight forward romance all stars lineup perfect

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Melissa's parents were bitches of the first order!! Rather a stupid ending

WetheNorthWetheNorth8 months ago

Nice

Straight forward no excess drama

miqael69miqael694 months ago

You have a delightfull way of leaving short that the reader can just use their own imagination for the rest of the story. Thank you.

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