by Bh76
Excellent Christmas love story! Best I've read in a long time. Very well written! I'd say it's worth 10 stars but have to settle for 5 BIG STARS! And a thank you. Merry Christmas Everyone! Merry Christmas Bh76.
An excellent, heart warming, and well written 5 star story.
A very merry Christmas to all!
Sorry I didn’t see this at Christmas, but then I like Christmas all year long.
5*
Tc
OMG. How many times do we have to read about some girl falling for the chiseled guy with the six pack abs? BORING 😴 😴 😴! Oh yeah, I forgot that it's the biggest lie that every woman tells, "Looks don't matter". Well at least we can say that your story is very factual. Except for Dex...
You see, here's the ugly truth that no one ever talks about. The "Adonis" type guys like Dex already know that women are going to throw themselves at their feet. So there's not a single one of them who will treat a girl with dignity and respect, unless they're going through the motions in order to 'set the hook' or impress the parents. 🤔 But as soon as they get what they want, then the real beast will make its appearance.
Nice guys always finish last. Just like they weren't present in your story either. Next time please write about an actual believable character. 1/5
You have a delightfull way of leaving short that the reader can just use their own imagination for the rest of the story. Thank you.