All Comments on 'When No Woman Equals Mom Ch. 03'

Please do a cum swallowing obsessed mother story the head described in this was amazing

I loved the series but felt a little bad for the dad. Couldn't Zach had thrown him a bone and programmed Crystal to give some sweet loving to her brother in law every once in awhile? I know he had Trixie but, come on, he could share a little!

I agree with Sex4lf57, no need to make poor old dad a complete cuckold.

Loved the story, but could use more proofreading and editing.

Keep up the good work.

The car blowjob was fantastic, best I have read in a while.

Much better than chapter 2....blow job scene was hot, but the other sex scenes could have been better

nice chapter more action included in this one than in chp 2, and no please don't share any of the girls to any man. I already hate it when he decided to share jasmine to walker and that larry. also I hope you continue with the story soon.

This story could be one of the best but you really need to stop this silly thing with sharing ...

I love your turn of phrase. In one story a while back you used "canoodling" and I loved it. The use of the word was so fitting yet came so far out of left field that it amazed me.

From a philosophical viewpoint, "CONDEMNATION OF INCEST IS A MERE SOCIAL CONSTRUCT." is also a great phrase. Both as it fits the story but also in the grander scheme of things.

Your writings are always a 5 with me. Thanks for sharing.

The descriptions are so real I felt I was watching and enjoying them up close and personal. I would like this story to continue on and on.

Maybe Bob could not or should not be shut out completely and a few subliminal messages could have him enjoy some of the action by bringing his sister or Trixie, into the arena or at least close by.

Perhaps one of the younger women could become pregnant, and the "family" could branch out.

Many thanks for this beautiful story.

HC

I was not expecting a twist like reading mom knew she had been "Programed" without some lead up too that. It came out way to abrupt and changed the tone of the whole story for me. All three stories as a whole are solid but need some fine tuning to make them flow. You need a fourth to tie it all in a neat bundle.

Cheers

Another really good chapter would love to read more of them, keep up the great work

Enough said.

All three chapters are really hot and excellent in their own way.

This story deserve more chapters and I concur with others comments about bringing others into the family and why not, some pregnancies.

It could be good to subliminally get Jasmine husband to accept her lifestyle, maybe get into the cuckold style, maybe Bob too.

Many possibilities to give up this story yet. But it is just my point of view.

Superb work!!!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work.

To bad it comes to an unfinished end.

I would had loved to read more.