All Comments on 'When One Door Closes'

AWSOME!!!!

Great job! I know some will ask for a sequel. That’s up to you, but it might be interesting to have a short update with a family increase.

I thought for a bit you might include Mom & Dad, but I think this is better.

5* or more…

Tc

Amazing story!!!

5 stars. Well written. Solid. Kinky.

AWWWSOME!!!!!

Stopped when he took it up the ass

Loved that they both loved their own cum, the kinks were cool, don't hear people admit to them much.

Stopped reading it once he took it up the ass ,,, 2⭐️ then

Thank you for NOT including the parents in their play! Very hot, would very much so like a follow up to how they are doing

I don't like long erotica. I like them short and to the point. This same story could've been told in like four pages if you cut out the repetitive sex we read about all story long. It also could've been shortened, and changed not at all or for the better, if you broke it up into chapters. I won't read this a second time.

Dildo, real place, been there.

Really enjoyed it. Don't understand some of the negative comments.

Not bad. I'm glad you didn't include the parents in their relationship. I wouldn't mind reading a follow up. See where you take their relationship, so long as you don't include anyone else. Just keep it the 2 of them.

I‘m also not into drugs, but as long as it is a joint, I don’t have a problem with it. And a casual drinking is ok too.

For the next time inform yourself about anatomy. Squirting while penetrated is impossible

Not going into why but bro/sis stories are my favorites. I love it when toys come out to play. My ex's idea of fun was cowgirl bc she was loose as a goose and that was the only way for a hint of tightness but come on, get real, bed knobs? hmm...I wonder, did she partake of them b4 we met?

Five stars!!!!!

As always, I top rating. I'm almost done with all your stories. Please keep writing!!!!

Great story -- I just had to skip over all the anal bits.