All Comments on 'When Ordinary Isn't Ch. 04'

Great story, really loving it. Thank you.

This romance has turned into a sensual love story. You write about their feelings and the depths those feelings go to. I can feel them getting closer and closer to their souls merging. I gave it 5 stars because I couldn't give anymore. I look forward to reading more and thanks for your time and imagination.

Excellent story, enjoying it very much! Please continue.

It is always entertaining to read OC's comments. Because they're usually so parochial which can only come from lack of real life experience.

Devo don't listen to OC. Because those who CAN write (like you) do. Those that can't troll others.

I deleted your comment. Not because it wasn't on point, but because it was based on hindsight after reading the remainder of the tale. Thus, it was an inexcusable spoiler.

But a beautiful love story. When real love is involved everything gets better. I hope those over-critical remarks don't bother you. It's always enlightening to read a woman's point of view about love making.

Fantastic romanticism I loved it, seemed a little odd at first but the reasoning was finally revealed

I’m just loving this series. It makes me miss my wife even more than usual. So much of what you write is how I would have liked to express my self but it doesn’t come through as beautifully as you do.

So far, only a 3 star for each chapter. Primarily, because they all seem to end on a dull note. I'm really hoping for a good conclusion though .

Another wonderful story. Thank you