All Comments on 'When the Birthday Present is You'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The first page was promising,

Then it turned to crap of the highest order!

TediumsShadowTediumsShadowover 5 years ago
any chance

for more of "imperfect friends" ? ?

TediumsShadowTediumsShadowover 5 years ago
oh just noticed

"imperfect friends" is listed as a 2-part series. all done? would you mind if I used those characters......maybe wrote a chapter 3? please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good BUT

good writing and good story in the first few pages but went downhill once Jack turned into a sicko. If the story could have been kept more upbeat I might have given it 5 stars, but I guess it wasn't meant to be.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

WHEN THE BIRTHDAY PRESENT IS YOU, chances are it's your karma to be that present.

["A girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do."]

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