All Comments on 'When Wondering Becomes Wonderful'

Good story. Keep going....

Keep it going. I love 'magic'

Loved It!!!

This story was fabulous. I was totally surprised and incredibly aroused. Well written. Please continue!!!

Very nice style; sexy hot, but sensitive and very believable. Also loved the twist at the end! Nice job!

You have a good idea for your story, but so many spelling and grammar issues it was hard to read. I found i was re-writing the story in my head with all the mistakes.