All Comments on 'When Words Fail'

What a loverly story or humiliation, hers then his, and sexual hatred. Sorry a story of two sick people in a marriage doesnt sound erotic to me. If she didnt like sex with the man who paid for her to be in her lifestyle and to stay home she could have divorced him and got on with her life. Nope she is a pure out and out adulterous slut using humiliation as a weapon. Such a nice six year old brain she has.

Very well done...nice balance of character development and action. Love the size humiliation story line...

It's a very erotic story to me, that why I'm keep looking for this kind of tales, I don't understand the people that don't like and keep reading them.

Try a different category, you might find success in the "wimp section".

and she will get hers. If her hubby divorce and Tom decides to leave her, then she will be out on her ass. Nobody likes to be humiliated, especially in the sex department.

Loved your story, particularly the size humiliation. That husband deserved it. More, girl, More!

Unfortunately, in the real world, an abusive husband like Greg would most likely end up killing her... as opposed to becoming a cuckold.

Why is she still married? Why not get rid of the husband and then have "MR ED" all to herself untill he gets bored of her!.

Don't mind the idiot critics. Story was great. Would love to read more.

As I was reading the story from the abusive begining to the raving revenge. The cock size seems like a big distraction from the abuse issue, and while I can imagine that you might have done it to attract more readers, it detracted IMHO, from the quality of story. As it is, it reminded me of the classic play "The three Penny Opera” by Berthold Brecht. In the play, there is a song, it's called "Jenny's song". It's about a humble maid in a bar/brothel. Everyone treats her like a low life (pretty much like the husband in this story). In her song Jenny sings her fantasy, about a pirate’s frigate which would appear one day at the city and upon her decision would cut off the heads of each and everyone of those who treated her so badly (she would join the departing frigate away from her miserable life). The lesson: let’s all be careful not to abuse our spouses in anyway or else a pirate with one eye (in one form of another) may appear at our doorstep…

It's hard to make an old story new, but you've done a really good job at it. Very good idea to focus on the beginning and cut right through to the final outcome. Nice work.

Ok Greg was no prize but Tori made him a cuckold in his own house with the handyman Tom.

Chapter 2 should go like this:

Tori, do you want Tom? You got him. Move out of my luxurious house sucking Tom's dick and live in his 3rd floor apartment cause after I divorce you for adultery and you get nothing that's where you'll wind up.

I HATE CHEATING WIVES, NO MATTER WHAT.

a meaty cock is smoked, cornhole is buggered, betrayed!

I am sorry, but I think this is one dumb ass story line. Good luck on future stories.

Went on this tables turned trite psuedo creative psuedo turd

Us small penis beta cuckolds need to know our place. Real men with real cocks should be the only ones who fuck our woman.

I'm so lucky to be married to a hot wife who loves feeding me her bosses cum.

Just plain boring waste of words