by Hypno_Love
Loved it when I had the rough copy... Love it more now... Can't wait for Part 2 to come out... 5 Stars... Added to favorites...
PS...Thank You for the props in the intro...
As you say in your Biography, you write about passionate encounters between women. Well, if your first two postings are any indication, you are succeeding beyond expectations. The “Aftermath” built the tension in an erotically beautiful way, while this story culminated in shared lust. Not sure if you intend to tell us where they go from here, but even if it ends now our imaginations can manage. Curious aside: maybe I missed something even after second read, but during the elevator sex scene you refer to stroking Valerie’s shaft (?). Please continue to share from your vivid imagination. 5 stars for both stories.
The title is same as a Jamiroquai song, nice touch. I liked a lot the story, it feels that you improved in character descriptions, congrats! Now it's even more fun to read your stories. I noticed that people were asking about it and also I'm not a native English speaker I understood from the context that shaft is clitor.
I think this one has said it all. There is going to be problems in any relationship. I don't need to be a voyeur. Let them go. Maybe write a companion piece and give us an update.
I'm liking your work a great deal they are short and simple while still providing heart as well as depth. They aren't just tales of mindlessly seeking pleasure.