All Comments on 'Where It All Began'

nice story!

Very well written and captivating!

why it began....heat seeking missiles....TK U MLJ LV NV

No way they wouldn't have taken her. The story seemed to imply all the guys weren't aware what was taking place. Wrong. This caused me to only give you a three. Whereas if the story had found the players nude, having sex and indicating the virgin being loved among all the boys, the stars would have certainly been a five course meal of more than fingers and I'd love to rate it five stars. Bring the group back together after a six month break from that playful night to get it on and give this lassie a GB and a great time. That would be worth more than a five. Actually enjoyed this story.