All Comments on 'Where No One Has Gone Before Pt. 03'

His dad is just a little over 60, retired over 20, did 32 in marines.....was he 10 when he enlisted????

Just keeps getting better and better!!!!!!! Well done! Thoroughly enjoyed it!!!

Another great chapter, 5 stars from me.

Read them all enjoy them all thank you and keep it up.

I don't like you anymore Tramp! Ya fookin made me tear up! Lol...So much going on in that Mind of yours obviously! Lol...to the adventures of Commander "Wild Bill" Jones!

I hope that ST is just pulling our leg when he said that, "There may be more to this story, so stay tuned...". This is a good one and deserves much more life!

You keep rocking my world, SaddleTramp. THANK YOU!

The part about the USS Arizona brought back some flashbacks. When I stood in front of that wall I noticed two pedestals right and left. The names on those pedestals were the names of the surviving crew that elected to be buried with their shipmates. My wife and I visited and it brought back some very emotional memories of 9/11. I was on a ferry that just made it opposite the north tower when the first plane hit. Needless to say that experience was quite traumatic but the part that I’ve really had to deal with emotionally were all of the printouts with faces and names posed on the ferry terminal glass wall. Many of those faces had been riding the ferry with me for two years and I recognized almost all of them - they were taped to the window spanning 12 feet high and 30 feet wide. The messages from loved once begging for information on whether they had been seen or not are still something that haunts me from time to time. The emotional response of seeing those names on the front pedestals for the memorial brings back a vision of that glass wall covered in pictures of missing loved ones and I have to take a minute to restore my emotional equilibrium. Thanks for your stories - I enjoy them quite a bit.

I had to stop and make a minor observation. Academy was in Florida in earlier chapters., now it seems to be in Texas. NOW BACK TO THE STORY

Other than the one blip I mentioned earlier. this was a great story. Please keep sharing your talent with us. 5 Stars again.

Thanks for a great story AND the great music, love the pipes and guitars! :)

Wow. Tabitha went for nearly likable early on to the Queen Bitch of the Universe by the end of this installment. What a piece of work. Thought some of it was over the top, like this ‘musical genre’ in which people get on stage and get fucked as part of the show, but it seemed to help demonstrate just how demented that bitch really was. An enjoyable story, with or without more down the road. Thank you for the time and effort you put into this.

Another 5 STAR story ST!!!!!!!!!

Please continue this series further.

You have really made this your own believable space opera. I look forward to much more!!!!!

I am loving this series, it has truly shown ST's range in storytelling. Thanks for sharing!

Great w! Hope there's more!?!

Great story!

5

Great story, I hope there is more to come.

Thank you

Well I for one welcome this change in direction from your other stories.

5 stars all the way. Thank you for a great space opera, with a very good underlying story.

This is such a great story line. U r doing agreat job with this. I just hope it doesnt go the way of alot of great stories here . The author gets toredof it n lets it die on the vine. Pls keep up tjegreat work n knp u r appreciated.

Dunmonymiv, if the line was good enough for TNG to borrow (when Data serves Scottie a drink), then it’s good enough for Tramp to borrow.

Very enjoyable. While initially reading about Gloria, I wondered whether the MMAS had survived below the radar, poised to cause havoc.

Great story and I hope there is more to follow. Also loved the musical reference :)

Excellent! How about another Western, soon?

Wonderful! Please keep the series going. After ST-TNG I just couldn't get up enthusiasm for the myriad subsequent spinoff, but this was like going back to a great reunion. Really enjoyed all the tie-ins. The music is also a great recurring theme. Initially I thought Kyra's mom caved too quickly, but on reflection she was probably ripe for a fall. Very accurate description of detonation in space and the difficulties in space combat. I'm vastly looking forward to more ST-ST in the vastness of space.

Kinda left us hanging at warp speed, aye! Hope there is more to come.

SAGE

You are an excellent story teller, stories are all 5’s , your copy editing is not perfect but good enough to be distracting - but “fade to black” is not erotic. The last time anyone in this series actually made love was their first time together in chapter one. I won’t be reading you any more.

Never been a fan of syfy but you wrote this story with such detail that I couldn't stop reading it ! Most of the time on the edge of my seat!! Thank you for the fantastic plot would love to see more adventures in the future.

What a fun story. I enjoyed it all starting with the Armstrong. Marvelous. Thank you for the work. John

Bravo.

I love space and btb so this was perfect. I would love another chapter as this can only be finished by ST

5 Stars is all I can say.

Excellent chapter adding to an incredible story. I also appreciate the fact that you start the chapter off with the end of the last one as a refresher of where it left off. Exciting, emotional and all around entertaining. I couldn’t have asked for anything more than that.

J.D.

dam good story line.

hope to read more

Way more entertaining than "Star Trek: Discovery" or "Picard."

Which isn't really surprising (the Kelvin timeline is garbage), but still quite welcome.

Thank you for the share, author.

There may be more to this story, so stay tuned I am so glad it is good 5*;s to all chapters so far ......

Thanks for the read waiting for more

txcracker

A hoot! Loved the StarTrek references throughout. Keep up the great writing! Thank-you

Really love this so far! Can’t wait to read the next story..

As person said the sloob rock and sex on stage thing ,have you ever seen GWAR. That is some strange shit .so it in not do far from the possibility. And please tramp keep it up I will read all your stuff I love it.

I await with bated breath you're next installment of this epic adventure.

Can hardly wait for another chapter. Excellent storytelling but was hoping for more drama with Tabby. I thought there would be more details about the pirates and how they managed to get the old shuttles and the nuclear device and a shame Tabby went so quickly. Still full 5 stars.

Great story hope to see much more of this one.

I certainly hope this is not the end.

A solid 4 stars.

Good stuff.

Brilliant more of this please I’d gladly pay to read stories this good

I do have to admit, I like this series better than some of your BTB stories but only some. This was good reading and I look forward to reading more chapters. Gene Roddenberry would be proud of this.

"What is this?" I asked. He looked at it carefully, then looked back at me.

"It's uh... green," he said. "Drink up, laddie!"

Great!!! Continue please.

I hope that this is just the latest of the continuing mission for the readers. While I recognized many of the ST crew I want to read the series again while searching for other key crew men. I'm also sure that there is a proud father who should be trying to interview his daughter about her role in stopping the pirate attack and destroying a large number of their ships.

Good story, high point for me was “No air - no shock wave”, low point was the cigars, completely vile things that stink like burning mouldy camel sh*t and old bus tickets, I can’t conceive of a future Earth where they are still in existence. (and yes I have tried them, so am entitled to an opinion)

Please continue ST….a really really great story that still needs to continue!

Kudos

TK

please add more chapters

Really enjoy your stories but this one was probably the best story I've read in awhile. Please write more of this soon really need to read more.

Still anxiously awaiting the next installment on this series. However I do love all your work and am rereading everything here. Do you have patreon or anything?

Just one thing that could have made it better: Bill should have rubbed Tabitha's face in the fact HE had been promoted to be Commander of the Enterprise. Because, y'know, he did things 'by the book'.

AWESOME more PLEASE

This is a story that deserves many, many more chapters, so well writen and adventurious!

Really REALLY well-written. Thank you!

Probably your best story yet, I'd love to be able to read more of this, lots more please.

Great story, AND, every time someone in a story plays a song I've never heard I go to YouTube and play it....two new songs and artists now in my Playlist....thanks,

Desert Pete

Just finished another read through, it’s still awesome. It would be wonderful if you were to continue the adventures!!!!

A story like this could go on for several more episodes; wouldn't want it become "old" though. Very enjoyable even though some of the interstellar adventures are bit "far out." Then again - far out is where they work! Great job, Author!

LOVED THIS!

VERY good job with the physics; the FTL sounds a lot like the Alcubierre drive.

Great characters.

Yes, another 5 star 🌟 👏story!

I'm especially liking the very well worked in nods to the TV Enterprise and her crew.

I agree with Rusty_M…. “It’s uh…green.” Great Story! Thanks.

One thing that I like is the accuracy of the astronomy.

Another great chapter from the world of Gene and Saddletramp1956. Thankyou

Love the series. Two comments: 1) regarding the USS Missouri - it used to be mothballed at the navy base in Bremerton, WA. When I was a kid we toured it with a group. At that time you weren’t allowed to take cameras on board. Had to check them. But was a fun experience.

2) Bill’ s dad was 60ish. He’d been retired for 20 years. But spent 32 years is the service. Did that mean he enlisted at the ripe age of 8 years old?

There needs to be consequences for the people who let the ex out of prison early!

Excellent, even the second or maybe the third time reading! Thanks ST, an excellent story. 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Arr maties! Pirates, what a lovely way to end one's honeymoon !Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Give the fucking lasagna a rest. I heard a rumor that there at least one other meal in existence