All Comments on 'Where the Lines Overlap Ch. 01'

That was an abrupt ending. Not even a cliff-hanger, so I have no idea what to be anxious about, lol! I sure hope the next chapter is up soon! It's good to be back on Lunaris, and I was happy to see Will again!

welcome back....and what an entrance! Thanks! Looking forward to the forthcoming chapters!

Thanks guys. It's definitely good to be back. I almost forgot how much I love writing. But anyway, this chapter was a little boring because it's just introducing some new characters and how they fit into the world I already built in 'The Lunar Life'. The real drama starts in the next chapter.

For anyone curious, the story will comprise of a total of 10 chapters which should all be up soon. Still waiting on Lit to approve my works, so it's beyond my control at this point.

Glad you guys like it so far.

Givin it 5 star because all your stories are always amazing. Don't have much to comment on since you just started but I'm excited to be introduced to the love interest. Glad you're back

I'm giving you 5 stars because I support all you do! This story, is soooooo good and I'm waiting for more! You're one talented writer with one of the best commands for English language I've seen on this website!

Thanks so much guys. I really appreciate the nice comments, especially the praise of my English. Haha. I do take pride in that but I have writing to thank for that. People always say that the best way to improve your English is to read, but they never tell you that writing does the same too. If you compare between 'The New Kid' and this story, there is quite the marked difference. Haha

Anyway, still no news on a date for the second chapter. C'mon Lit, approve it already. My guess is it'll be up by 6/25 but don't quote me on that.

Great start. I can't wait to read more - please sir! Thank you!

You are a great storyteller and I'm glad to see another romance story has emerged on Lunaris! So happy that you have also included Will and Thane and what they have been doing in-between their ending and the start of Kevin and Taron's!

*I have already read this story til the end but am now getting around to commenting (:

I am with the populace here a great introduction to this story. I can't wait to read the rest