All Comments on 'Where's the Glory in That? Pt. 01'

by Msdirtylittlesecret

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Rifraff123Rifraff123almost 7 years ago
Well done

I hope you write more, I really enjoyed this... I immediately looked for the sequel.

Nice work. VERY hot!

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 7 years ago
Wonderful story

Thanks for such beautiful writing.

Alwaystaboo

DavBooDavBooalmost 7 years ago
More please

Great start, looking forward to reading more of this story. Dave.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
DON'T LEAVE US HANGING BRO

DOOD keep writing, I was so disappointed when I reached the ebbs and couldn't find a link to the rest. Please finish it!

Thanks

Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice writing but...

I'm not really sure why this is in the incest/taboo section, the story ended before anything sexual even happened. This would be better suited in the non-erotic section.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
What happens now?

Nice workup. Where's the payoff?

Anonymous
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