All Comments on 'While on Holiday'

by Ashson

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Strange comment to make but I’m honestly impressed and pleased that you used accurate information about the hymen like congrats that’s fucking rare also great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I'm always wet

Your stories turn me on all the time. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

OMG one of your stories went more than 3/4 of a page... SHOCKER!!!!!

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 4 years ago
No one under the age of 50 says “round heels”.

Or watering hole or any of the other colloquialisms you use. And I don’t know too many 18 year olds who are round heels, whatever the fuck that means.

Old tell you to go fuck the horse you rode in on; but you probably do that already.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More rice milk from Ashson

So just how many more times are you going to write the same banal story? Maybe include an actual character next time.

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