All Comments on 'While The Folks Are Away'

Hot and Horny story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this was at terrible story. When someone writes, it is so telling about their own life. This writer is a desperate loser guy who doesn't get laid and he failed miserably at portraying a female protagonist.

The grammatical and spelling errors can easily be overlooked. But NO woman I've ever known would go on a 2 week trip and leave her makeup bag behind.

Left it hanging! Went from three stars to two

short but sweet & lovely!

You could of added a end, like the comment above me said, you left the story hanging.

made me wet

Awwww, how come you didn't finish this story? It has quite a lot of potential for fun between the girl and her father. I'd certainly enjoy reading a follow up to this.

even though it was short it REALLY got me hard lol....I blame it all on the "daddy" talk and knowing she and her father both share that incestous bond.And oh,a special shout out to her stepmom for providing her with that vibrator AND "a better place to shove it" hehe

Dad should have caught her, then they could fuck while watching the porn, but still a good story.