All Comments on 'While the Whole Town Slept'

Didn't feel much like erotica, maybe because Nell was written so lovingly. I got sad thinking about her life and loss. But it's a beautiful story. I hope you're using your writing skills elsewhere too!

... It was a gem of a story. A rare find for this category. Please keep writing sir. Panther fan.

A beautiful, melancholy tale of unrecognized yearning for more (which she received). Very well done.

Character development was superb and her awakening was spectacular. I had the feeling of reading Steinbeck, but better, because he would never have been allowed to write a sex scene like that. I sincerely hope you write more.

Absolutely top shelf. What could have been a squalid, sordid tale of submission was lifted to a higher plain by your writing talent. Truly wonderful piece of literature, I wish I could give it ten stars but they only allow five.

For the read.

There are very few small typing mistakes in this unusually good story.

I seldom read "Rape" stories. Fortunately, I happened onto this one by accident. The rape attack sequence definitely does qualify for Literotica, but the balance of the story rises far above erotica. Based on this story alone I now will look at some of the author's other stories. I wonder if the category classification of this story is the reason no one has written a review of it in two years. I hope an additional sampling of the author's writing continues with the skill shown here.

I love how descriptive you are. I could see the scene from her porch and the things she was remembering. I can't wait to read more of your writing!