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All Comments on 'Whirlwind 01 - Finish Line - Pt. 04'

by QuantumMechanic1957

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

QM you cannot leave us hanging.

A great tale and I think you are doing pretty good with the flashbacks.

Keeping the past tidy while driving the story forward has been well done.

The only element of the story that jars is that Irish girl bands are my second least enjoyed music after rap. Maybe members of Irish girl bands deserve to be in romantic depression because of what they inflict on the world?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
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Love the story, can't wait for the next chapter to be posted.

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Retiring soon (I hope) from a 40+ year engineering career. Happily married to my best friend, with children and grandchildren. Have been writing various novels and short stories for years, including some personalized ones for friends and family (Its a nice gift, your own story...