All Comments on 'Whispers in the Night Ch. 02'

Damn this slow burn is killing me but it’s so good.

I thought the entirety of the Colin stuff really derailed all the greatness of the previous chapter. It went from this really exciting step by step discovery of this mother and son to 'aw yeah you can fuck your mom all guys want to and I already do it' bluntness. Then the protag just starts lying to his mom multiple times. I guess I was really disappointed especially because I thought chapter 1 was so darn good.

I can’t wait for the next story!

I am all in!!!......can't wait for more.

Your story had an interesting buildup and I look forward to the next chapter.

really slowed it down here,

Hot

Ok, now you’re just teasing us! I thought we’d get more action in chapter two, but it’s still great. The long slow build-up is going to make the pay-off that much more incredible. Keep up the good work!

Agree with the young girl from Albany about the pay-off being worth the effort. Once again you have written a best seller. Keep it up, I'm on the edge of my seat.

Loving the slow build up ... kinda like how you eat an elephant... :D

Need

When is chapter two going to be posted

When is Chapter 3 going to be posted?

Spoke too soon about hoping for another chapter. After checking out the Authors story list I found this and another chapter. Now, on to the next chapter and maybe Steve and his mom will make the connection.

I believe this story accurately reflects how an actual incestuous relationship would began. The mental and emotional turmoil is accurately portrayed. Both potential lovers realize how much damage could be inflicted on each other and the family unit. Finally, both individuals realize that their love for each other encompasses more than just sex. They recognize and accept each other in the many roles that they have in life.