All Comments on 'White Out Hut'

Loved the story, reminds me of backpacking and camping in Maine. I always carried a couple of spare tarps for just such emergencies.

Very nice. Some typos (and you have a lot more excuse than most of us, Ogg!) All the ones I noticed right off are near the end.

"outr door" = "outer door"

"ofest" = "offset" ??

"hand=ging" = hanging"

"The new walls we lined": "we" -> "were"

And not a typo, but: " . . . now I just had to have sex with Mary."

Such a hardship!

for us all.

Thanks Ogg.

hp

Thank you, Wilcox. Those typos (and some others) now edited.

Good story. 5 stars

What a genuinely nice story.

GREAT READ !

THANK YOU ! ! !

I love the idea of "draught-free widows".