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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Loving this so far

Not much of a Warcraft fan, but this story is hot.

Free Hong Kong!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Your writing is entertaining. Though, admittedly from a purely critical point of view, the story is very repetitious. I would suggest letting Anduin lose. Fail. Not forever but an impossibly perfect and unfailing protagonist that can never lose and so there are no stakes? Just becomes the same scene with a different face.

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