by PickFiction
Are you sure the two men “arguing” in the parking lot were not trying to shoot Tony?
continuity problem: out for Italian and some how chow mein showed up?
On Page 2 Tony knew about he grandmother talking with Vern but by page 3, he didn't know. "I had no idea."
Can you really get shot, have a through and through and leave the hospital in one day? I know....fiction.
only 3 stars this time ... sorry, but the story is a little simplistic and implausible in it's simplicity