All Comments on 'Who Watches the Watchmen Ch. 07'

by aurelius1982

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Before the whiners arrive...

... these masochists who love to read stories they hate - and pathetically demand that the athor stops writing!!..oh God hi hi hi...

Go for it Dara... you gorgeous old bull!... show those sorry-assed limpdcks how real men please their women!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

The twist of the story is really great.

impo_61impo_61almost 9 years ago
Written by a Gurkha...

"Gurkhas traditionally returned to their homeland of Nepal following their military service, to resume a life of subsistence farming or labour in lowes tasks". Gurkhas if not in the military are a low form of life in India society. They use them as military and then get read of them...Cows are sacred, Gurkhas are lower than dogs...Knowing this, anyone can understand why some people (or Gurkhas or their sons) have the need to write this kind of stories about the "superior" Hindu race, making all women whores and all men weak and wimps...1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
intresitng bt predcitable...

aaah i really love ur stries,,,bt over the time reading many reader evertyhgn seem to predictable....she picked up to call banke nw she gonna have revenge sex in frnt of her,,,declaring her feling fr banke!!they all cope up nd have sex.. she open up to backdoor sex,,then a three some with banke dara nd thn soon wth vimla also joining in....his 9 inch cock with thick cock of dara will alternately drill all her holes..my advise if ur line of thght is in this way try bringing back husband fr smetime nd the break betwween as the reason fr her giving up her ass

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
The whiners are here!

Who reads this garbage? Skim a couple of paragraphs and you understand that the writing hasn't improved from the first chapter. It hasn't gotten clever. It hasn't become original. The dialogue hasn't gotten interesting or hot. This mess simply isn't entertaining to read. Who cares about the subject matter? If it's bad writing, it's bad reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
rocking episode

Aurelius1982 - this episode rocked!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
How could Literotica increasy the pleasure of the readers

@Anon A sexual minority likes this type stories. The best would be for us if Literotica had divided the stories for sexual minority and sexual majority. So the pleasure of all readers community would have a maximum!

A willing cuck, wife sharing story hub and how do the sexual majority manage the cheating wives hub could increase the the pleasure of every reader.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
dont worry

Dont bother abt the buggers who r trying to discourage. keep on writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
story rocks

Dnt bother abt others comments....

I lke the way u carry out the story ....

Continue early lookin fwd to more episodes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I feel you lost control of your plot

Now with the maid is 3 knowing the wife slut behaviour.When the dog and the horse will be in?

And even a cuck husband like yours would be worried about his son.The mess is too close to home for his comfort.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Next level

This is hot & depraved -which is super..only 2 characters left to join the party - the young dickhead watchman & the philandering husband!! Look forward to your next.

Also, why the fuck do people read through and whine? There are plenty others on this site if this isn't for you. Losers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
katrina

i like to imagine the wife to look like katrina....and u must continue the story with the wife becoming polyandrous....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
OHH IT WAS TOO HORNY

YES IT WAS TOO MUCH FOR ME AND IT HELPED ME MASTURBATE A FEW TIMES AND I FELT GREAT. WISH IT WAS ME INSTEAD OF MENAKA. RINA

rinakrishna3@yahoo.co.in

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Actually this is disguesting.

Oh another cockold story about the unwashed.

OnethirdOnethirdalmost 7 years ago
Great progression

This is a really good set of chapters, written quite well with interesting action and dialog. To the distressed previous reviewer, take a hike and stop bothering people. Useless. I like the dynamics between the different classes. The husband is a conflicted rogue who garners no sympathy; his crude comments to his wife don't endear himself to her, but do give her full permission. These chapters are a nice surprise to read- I am glad to find them after reading so many mediocre stories lately.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Amazing

5 🌟 story your story telling ability very good.i am Big fan of your story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Too bad that Prakash didn't mention Jennifer!

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