All Comments on 'Who You Really Are'

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Templar_WriterTemplar_Writerover 6 years ago
Wow

That was really different. A complex story that leaves you uncertain of where it's going, but eager to find out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

It was good and hot but did you watch inception before writing this?

mildmagpiemildmagpieover 6 years ago
Super cool

and super hot! Excellent story!

PerilEyesPerilEyesover 6 years ago
Great!

Nice crafted!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Now that I read this twice, I am convinced that Liz is her true identity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Did that story pull me in! Lyra was a delight lol, believing she's Nadia's domme. Poor pretty girl! Wish powerful hypnotism like this was real... It would take a heck of a lot of trust to allow someone to change who you really are, but wouldn't that be sooo good?

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Hi! I'm Kallie, a writer of erotic stories - mostly mind control and hypnosis-themed erotica, but I have written other stuff in the past and may do again. The main platform for my writing is my Patreon page, and by throwing me a few dollars a month on there you can ensure I ke...