All Comments on 'Whore or'

A very well put-together and fairly hot synopsis. Very logical progression. No glaring plot holes or anything I might find objectionable. Could have been a true story for all I know. I particularly like how she got really angry at Christina for tricking her at the start, even thought she found a part of the experience pleasurable.

An interesting premise that you have developed well, beautifully written, proofread and edited, leaving no glaring errors.