All Comments on 'Who's the Slave?'

Another great story. Thank you. Glad you keep at it.

Still, five stars

I have read a number of your stories and found them wanting-- this was not one of them. It showed the humanity of a man who has faced danger and death, and from his experience understood what its results were for those who were not combatants--only victims. Well done, indeed.

Rachel

I think you need to tear up a certain sack. She is over-doing your captivity by using the sack to hold you. You were the one to free her from the sack but she's dominating you with it. Her restraining you is beyond an equality thing. It's going into a dominance that should not happen.

Sweet story!