All Comments on 'Who's Watching Who?'

beautifully written. erotic, sensual, and a 7 1/2 on my meter.

Thanks for your erotic submission. Nicely paced, and hot, too!

Terrific writing with great characters, especially the lovely doctor to be. What a dream to have a physical from a 25 year old Goddess. Great job

Top notch!..

Kept my interest all the way thru..

The character were great and so was the story..

Look forward to more writings in the future...

Story flowed well. Spelling distraction at the end , did you mean "...little known day.."

thank you

and fun read. I loved it. Great use of nudity for the contest. Good luck!

story captivated me at every sentence.

Lovely character development; neat surprise that Julian had known from the beginning that Brian was watching her.

Well-written and well-paced; built nicely to the finish. Thanks! Enjoyed the story.

Way to show, and not tell. I can tell you're a very well experienced writer.

I want to be Julian!

J

Hints of John D and Travis McGee here. Which is high praise indeed.

Wonderful story! I hope we hear more. I would love to share too if you contact me at florida_beaches@aol.com Thanks!

Good detail to make it interesting so it's not a wham bam thank you mam. It's also a pleasant change not to have the C word in it. I'm a girl who hates that word. Nothing sounds more sexy than pussy.

Being a nudist I enjoyed the focus on two people comfortable naked together. Could not put down the story as the eroticism built between Jillian and Brian.The author's description of the couples fucking, I was kept erect during the story and could not hold back my own orgasm when Brian started shooting and cumming in Jillian.

One of the best stories. Hope the author has more lake this.

Great story, well told. Thanks.

Very nice storyline...started with anticipation and kept building to the amazing climax. Well done! Loved it and I can say that it kept me hard the entire time.

Very enjoyable read, I'd love to take a full part in nude day. Just being nude all day in the house doesn't quite cut it. Maybe next year if they don't lock us up again.

Great characters, and nicely paced, arousing climax to it all.

I very much enjoyed reading this story. Nicely paced out, kept me interested and got me aroused! Yes, I very much liked the language used - the C word does nothing for me I much prefer the word pussy. Thank you

I liked it alot, but "love box"????????????????????????????????