All Comments on 'Who's Your Daddy?'

A little confused who Denny was at first. Nice story though.

I was a little confused who Dennis was. But that's kind of the point.

Nothing on the first page interested me, so that much time on your submissive was wasted.

OMFG Great just doesn't do it justice!!!

I would love to see a part two!!! Man I love this story!!!!

What is odd is that you didn't have the characters actually 'saying' half the things they were suppose to have said, it was narrated that they said it which pulled me out of the story. There was a LOT of repetition which felt like padding the length of the story without actually adding anything to it. The pacing was very sluggish, which was made worse with the previously mentioned repetition.

It's not a bad story, just very slow without much in the way of character development.

I liked the story but where's the incest?? Just a mother masturbating and rubbing her sons cock you need to continue with this story??? Gave it a 4 cause no incest.

Trash ass story. The Mc is indecisive as hell. And what's with the over use of inner monologue? It's unnecessary just skip to the fucking