All Comments on 'Wicked Amusement Ch. 06'

You know what the thing is about your stories?

They're borderline hypnotic - are hypnotic.

I don't object to that at all... I'm more immersed by it, you might say.

That's a good idea—I was thinking the same thing. Note, however, that Balabar didn't use that many triggers. I think the main one that *might* have been a trigger was "bimbo", and it was left ambiguous, as I recall.

I do want to explain at some point what triggers do to their placer, but this story won't have space for that. A Tumblr story, though...

Really interesting read as always, and a fast upload from the last story it seems, nice.

I remember the "triggers affect the hypnotist too" from EF with the nymphs, but I never think it was explained how it works. Balabar from SC didn't seem to have any problems, so I imagine it's a Fey problem? It could maybe be an interesting Tumblr read? To have the short story be about a Fey who has reached the final, critical edge of burning her brain out with triggers, and then the clinical explanation about how it works?