All Comments on 'Wicked Game'

please don't let this end here...it's hot!

NOT SURE IF I LIKE THAT.

I would definitely like to read another chapter of this story. It kind of draws you in without you realizing it. Quite like that. ;)

The tale will be One Of The Best, if you add some more of those everyday little actions that people enjoy doing. I have sent a feedback to you. I, personally, would like to see more of this tale. Thank you

More please love this story please write some thing about there daily lives or some thing I'm begging u here

This was fuckin awesome. I loved it...I NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!

This has got to be one of the most emotionily detailed, put together, character driven and provoking storied that I have ever read here on Lit. Clearly, very very well written and sensuously touching at the same time. You did an amazing job. I look forward, with great anticipation, to reading more of your work. Please, please keep writing!!

~EnchantedGreen~

Coming undone by korn and perfect drug by nin could work just as well....

So addictive!

Very good story, I see no elements of twilight at all.

liked the build up, the need in each other for each other, to be wanted by the other