- Loving Wives
- Wife and a Stranger
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Click hereAttempt number two, also fiction, see what you think. It's taken a while as writing your own story is not nearly as exciting as reading everyone else's.
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My sex life of late has been a little off, as if it needs a change up of some sort. Both my wife and I are going through periods of disinterest in each other and at times it's as if she finds me boring. Every now and then after a particularly long day at work, she's an events planner, she'll come home and start tearing my clothes off as soon as she's through the door. The ensuing sex is fantastic; hard, fast and passionate. Unfortunately when I try to initiate something similar the resulting sex is lacklustre and she can be quite unresponsive. I'm in two minds about trying to have an affair and I've taken to sneaking off to watch porn either on the computer or in town at the adult cinema. This brings me to the story I want to tell you, I may just have found my change up.
Work was giving me the shits one day so I decided to sneak home in the afternoon and watch some porn on the laptop, my wife was in a meeting all day so I'd have the house to myself. I decided to use the bungalow so I would have time to adjust myself if my wife came home. As I walked across the backyard I could feel my cock swelling with anticipation and I had to resist the temptation to jack off in the sunshine. As I approached the door I could see it was partly open so I slowed down a little and then I heard voices. I crept up to the side window and peeked in and got the shock of my life, I could see my wife naked and on her knees in front of a strange man who was also naked. I couldn't believe it, I was speechless and rooted to the spot. The stranger moved slightly and I caught sight of his cock, it was enormous, at least 9 inches. My wife was staring at this guy's cock with a look of pure lust and she slowly grasped it with both hands. The stranger's body stiffened and he moaned softly as my wife slowly ran her tongue along the underside of his cock.
I can't believe what I'm seeing, my wife is on her knees taking a monster cock in her mouth and I'm watching as if it was porn posted anonymously on the net, no anger, no jealousy, just a sense of excitement.
I watch the stranger thrust his hips forward and my wife tries to swallow as much as she can, but she can't take it all. I can just imagine that glistening cock head entering her throat and suddenly I'm rubbing my own cock through my pants in time with the strangers thrusts. This is one of the most intense moments of my life, I silently release my cock from my trousers and the stranger and I are both pumping in unison as my wife sucks and slurps on his cock and plunges the fingers of her spare hand into her sopping pussy. The pace starts to build and becomes almost frenetic, the stranger's face is contorted with ecstasy and his whole body trembles as he cries "I'm coming". My wife takes his cock from her mouth and wanks it furiously and suddenly he spurts great globs of come all over her face and chest; at almost the same moment my own cock pulsates and I shoot the biggest load of my life. With a start I realise I have crept forward and can probably be seen from inside, my come has sprayed all over the garden and is running down the window. I hurriedly back away and can hear the stranger say "Fuck that was fantastic, the best head job I've ever had."
I hurry back into the house, adjust myself and race out to the car as quick as I can incase they come inside. As I drive back to the office my head is spinning. Images of my wife sucking that huge cock, her frigging herself and blasts of come hitting her face and chest are whirling around in my brain. The rest of the afternoon is a blur, every time I think of what I saw my cock goes hard and I have to restrain myself from wanking under the desk. I feel disconnected from what happened, as if they were both strangers and I was a voyeur looking through their window. I don't feel angry towards my wife or the stranger, just excited and almost eager to get home and see what she does, will today be a 'tear my clothes off' day?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 4 years agopitiful - wifes not interested in sex with him but fucking a stranger and he's not sure how to feel.
26thNCover 5 years agoYou're out. Don't think you need to bother to write again. Finish high school, then try again.
Anonymousalmost 8 years ago....comes on to her, she's cool to the idea? If ever that was cause for alarm, this instance is. She jumps when she's worked up and needs cock. When he needs pussy, she's already gotten off and has not interest in hubby. So hubby is stability, a roof, social standing, perhaps, a paycheck that allows them better than apartment living...? And apparently he discovered she's a size queen and actively cheating. So, if the precedents were clues, his eyewitness experience was proof....and like a total and true cuck, he's excited about it. Too bad. He's about to go down the rabbit hole from which solitude and hurt and angry misery are his only experiences....while she's off getting her jollies whenever it suits her and usually at his expense. And pacing is painfully slow in this one, like watching a mountain slide down into the adjacent valley. Inexorable and crawlingly slow.
Time to burn or cut and run or find his own entertainments at her fucking expense.
I really, really, REALLY wish cuck writers could muster more I,agitation and offer something other than how hot they get when wifey cheats. Yes, I get that they LIKE the degradation, the hurt, the denial, the belittling and overt denigration.
I do not. I read, searching for a story of this type that offers something....anything new, different, engaging....anything within the story with potential to entertain.....and am consistently disappointed.
Writing got pretty sloppy in spots, which is uncharacteristic of you lot. Suggest you have a care about your technical detail and settings in you writings. Environment matters as much as events. If you offer familiar setting or apt descriptions of locales, there is more to relate to....more to entice and interest.
In trend, however, it left me so,exact cold and feeling used.
No. Thank. You.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoCome up with a different slogan. Yours is getting stale,Bonny. 1* for the whores of Lit BT &SS
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThe only sex life you have is a rubber dollie, you and the little bopper are a couple of peeping perverts, must be something in the water.
Rockyderek_caalmost 8 years agoWhat?? No cell phone video so hubby can pound his pud later??? Poor excuse for a new dumbass cuck.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoVote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!
Anonymousalmost 8 years ago"I can't believe what I'm seeing, my wife is on her knees taking a monster cock in her mouth and I'm watching as if it was porn posted anonymously on the net, no anger, no jealousy, just a sense of excitement."
The comments and voting trends that I see indicate a very low acceptance rate for the cuckold husband/voyeur fetish in the LW category. I think there is a category for those miserable appetites, but I've not perused it; why would I want to? If you want a positive response in the LW section for a story that has a cheating wife and/or a cuckold then you have to include reasonable causes, effects, and punitive consequences. It can be uplifting, where the good people end up good, or it can be tragic, where everyone ends up bad. But when you have the bad people end up good, or even neutral, it tends to violate the group's sense of righteousness. Its not a question of morality as much as ethics and Karma.
When you do bad shit to people you claim to love and respect, when you break promises, vows, you deserve to get caught, and to pay a penalty. Most LW readers love sex and romance and lust and eroticism, but we hate betrayal, humiliation, cruelty, and emotional brutality toward innocents. We don't read LW stories to stroke an appetite for sex and adultery, we read these stories to enjoy good honest decent people being rewarded for their ethics, integrity, love, and honor. And we enjoy reading how bad people who violate good people end up getting caught, and how both groups, good and bad, end up getting what they deserve. We take no pleasure in a woman's betrayal, a husbands humiliation, or a child's loss of its family. In fact it really pisses us off. So it makes us happy when the story concludes with good winning over evil, and evil people getting their just penalties.
Guess in the end we are a boring group of readers. It is readers like us that make stories like Romeo and Juliet, War And Peace, Gone With The Wind, Pride And Prejudice, etc. classics.
If you want to write perverted shit about perverted people I think there are plenty of categories within Literotica for those types of stories. And I think they tend to get warmly welcomed and highly rated, I think. Who cares? Go do that shit there. Loving Wives is for lovers, and those who enjoy reading about true love winning over betrayal and cruelty. If LW was for murder mysteries, our favorite parts would be where the murderer gets caught, then electrocuted. Letting one of the murder victim's survivors pull the switch would sweeten the ending. It is what it is.
Good luck with future writing.
