All Comments on 'Wife and Ex-Wife Ch. 01'

I enjoyed the first chapter. I don't know where you are going, but I'll read on. Thanks.

I like your style of expression. But the chapter seemed to end at an awkward place.

Both were needy, and you did a good job of expressing her emotions, a bit difficult in a third person voice, but you left the ending kind of jarring lay.

Why are you here?

1 star

OK, a butt-fuck doesn't really serve was a wife and ex-wife. Don't think I saw the ex-wife here, so yeah, I know where you're heading, but that's about three chapters out.

Long way from LQA these days. Live the good life.

He just met her, and he's already sticking it up her ass. He doesn't seem to care if he gets her pregnant, and he presumes to know how she should live her life. Yeah, he's definitely a Democrat.

I make it a rule to stop reading a story when politics gets thrown in right at the beginning.

A divorced woman meets a guy and they have sex.

I don't understand the title and how it relates to the "story". Is this chapter done? It just kind of cuts off.

How does this fit in the Loving Wive's category? Is there something coming in a future chapter that involves actually married people having sex with people outside their marriage?

That's the nicest thing I can say. 3*

If you hadn’t left this story just hanging, had provided some conclusion, had included the story line alluded to in the title, I would have given you a higher rating, but as it is, with no reason to wait for a second helping, but NO. 1 Star.

Except some outbursts hinting at him having prior knowledge of her life.

Keep going, at least yours is different than most junk on LW

I was doing great until you brought politics into it. I read stuff on this site to get away from the garbage. If I wanted to think about politics, I would watch or read the news. So that's as far as I got.

. . . be any good in bed, not if he’s a Democrat.

Nina is a funny, awkward character - great internal monologue - her insecurities really grab your heart (and make you laugh). The sex isn’t bad either. Only in LW would this not be a 4,5 + story and only here would people use the story to bicker about Democrats and Republicans! 😱

I took he's not a Republican as an internal joke. She probably wouldn't have worried if he had been. It's his actions that counted.

Thought I would weigh in. When I got to the political stuff, I lost interest. Will be kind, no rating.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and getting to know Nina, who seems to be a delightfully complex person. Patrick is a little less developed as a character, so I look forward to the sequel. I like the way the accidental fall into quite a strange hole accelerated their intimacy. I think they may have a future together. Five stars.

PS: Congratulations on being allowed to slip in a little politics. I've tried that, too, but the Literotica Censors have sent such stories to the dustbin. Apparently, from a Literotica perspective, we live in a sexual world devoid of politics.

Stupid story, what's wrong with a republican? As if a loony tunes corrupt democratic is any better ...