All Comments on 'Wife Applies For Modeling Job'

Hey, Vic. I truly loved your story. I must be like most boys, even tho I've seen 6 decades come and go. I still remember when I was very small peeping at my mom and she bathes. Even at a very very young age, I was mesmerized with her large full breasts. I'd love to see "Mom" and Allan have a totally full fuck session with the whole work gang chiming in. Or Allan and the real son turn out to be school buddies, and.....Thanks for the great story

Hey, I think every kid, boy and girl, like to peek and see what every one looks like. Don't know how many get the chance to go farther. Maybe more than I think. Good story.

Hi Vic,

I think this story relies on phantasy, but in part. Otherwise how could you imagine the sex pages of mom-son pics and films?

Sure, that beside the money, some actors and actresses enjoy what they do before the camera.

I enjoyed this story too accompanied with a solo play.

Congratulations!

your calling a 40 year old woman a girl. I can tell you're young but you still need to make your writing age appropriate.

I liked the idea that she got interested in her son because of the modeling shoot, but confronting her son about fulfilling the fantasy doesn't sound realistic. She should've seduced him, instead of directly talking him into it.

Interesting story line but I like them a little more believable. Nice start , but continue working on specific details, Vic.

sure it was a good idea for a story but you rushed it and it wasn't at all realistic. did you really think it would be believable at all? if so then you definatly are stuck in a fantasy world. I'm thinking your fairly young but maybe once you've gotten a little older and mature you could write a decent story but for now stay away from posting your writting.

You did a premise I haven't seen yet, but it was a little uncomfortable. I would work a little on your story flow.

I have always believed mothers and fathers, sons and daughters should be able to freely give in to basic instincts and needs with one another. It isn't wrong, it's healthy for all. Daughters and Sons should have their first, and continuing sex with their Fathers and Moms. Why not as long as no one is forcing anything?

I am no expert in creative writing, but for my taste this story should have been split in two chapters: Ch. 1 to include all porn studio scenes, & Ch. 2 should have been an expanded version of the evening mom & son spent together.

If my mom were a porn model i would think i died & went to heaven.

This needs to be continued, please. Excellent, 5 stars

This should be continued. Maybe Alan and her Son in a threesome? The young black guy and her? Either or both could be interesting. 5 stars

Would like to see another chapter including mother and black guy. Maybe she has daughter to get involved too?

although to me, the sex was very mechanical. nothing sexy. but a cute read

I gave it 3* because she turned herself into prostitute without any guilt whatsoever.

The incest was what kept above 1*.

Nice, but predictable photo session. The mom romantic coupling was well done. Keep working as your style needs twerking a bit.

There needs to be more chapters to this story

VERY GOOD WOULD LIKE TO SEE ANOTHER CHAPTER WHEN SON COMES AND SPENDS THE NIGHT WHILE DAD IS ON A BUSINESS TRIP

You need to stop writing this garbage, maybe get out of the house and actually get laid. Pathetic read

Need another chapter where dad gets involved . . . .

Enjoyed the read, Thanks for your writing.

Love it... lots to go forward here.... her son and Alan do here at the same time... she goes black... hubby finds out and loves the idea..