All Comments on 'Wife at the Company Retreat'

Why is it always "innocent wives" who turn into cuckolding sluts? Wouldn't it make more sense for her to be at least a LITTLE slutty to begin with?

Great story! Well thought out and funny plot. I can never get enough of the wife turned slut stories when they are done well. I am glad you’re back to writing. As for the critical comments, if you don’t like these type of stories, don’t read them.

5/5!

Love the little psych-twists of the miscommunications and misunderstandings... great tension!

I don’t have any problems with couples who enjoy extra marital sex, tbh to me this didn’t come across as sexy instead it was depressing with a large helping of embarrassment and guilt.

I didn’t understand why she didn’t call out to her husband or tell Roger to back off. Obviously plenty of people will read it as see something different.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)

Boy, there's always sensitive people in the comments. Especially in the 'Loving Wives' section. I like all kinds of stories. Wasn't a damn thing wrong with this. Authors always getting screwed over because of people crying that a story goes a certain way. Just you don't like certain things happening in the story, doesn't mean that the story was bad. Now I'm gonna sit back and wait for the sensitive people to come at me

Oh, my! Welcome back, Mr. Overns! What a way to return to Literotica with a story as hot as this one is! It was well written and thoroughly enjoyable. Michael should have warned Beth about the extra dimension to the party, but it's understandable that he didn't, since had he done it, she surely would not have come. There has to an aftermath, too; will there be a part two? If yes, I'd love to read it and enjoy it. I think the idea of revenge as motivation for Beth's actions, even if (especially!) it turned out to be false, was well done. Five stars, ~~ JB Edwards

So did he mean the hide and seek or the sex part of the game?

What ruined this for me was the fact that adults are playing hide and seek. That right then early on made we less interested. The second and most damning part of the story is when Brad started to feel her up she let it go rather than being found. You would think a loving wife would slap the guy and maybe scream. Yet several times in the story she holds back any sound so they wouldn't be caught yet she didn't want to do this. Third thing is if Michale knew about the sex why bring his wife or why not tell her to be careful that the guys all want to screw her. IN a way she should be pissed he kept that secret.

Stupid. She now has to think what is next once everyone at work talks and Michael finds out he has a cheating slut for a wife.

I enjoyed the story. I was hoping that Brad would score with Beth and fill her sweet married pussy with his potent semen, but it was good anyway. Keep up the great work, and I'll be watching for your next story.

Does anyone think the impudent, demanding, impatient Roger will wait a year to tap that ass ? I don't. Hint hint.

Please say chapter 2 is on the way

I don't understand why people who don't have this fetish have to go on every hotwife/cuckold story and complain. Don't listen to them, they'd never like any story in this genre in the first place no matter how good it is.

from those of us that do, THANK YOU! There's so little content on here that scratches the itch in just the right way, you do a fantastic job!

Keep churning it out!

Original idea, great story.

While it's another slut-ray story, it was well done.

She needs to fuck Brad ASAP!

Was hoping the fat old sleazy boss would get her! Hot stuff Clark!

being well written doesn't mean it's a good story...Is bad, the characters even worst,.Nothing good in here

She wasn't who you set us up to be - 4*

I thought this was well-written and well-edited, which is more than half the battle on this site. I didn't understand, however, how Roger slapping the wife's ass while under the bed with MIchael just about to leave the room didn't trigger Michael discovering Beth under the bed with his boss. I also agree with the comment that Michael would have surely told Beth about what transpired at this party BEFORE taking her to it, especially to protect her feelings and her body from being groped if spouses were not allowed to hide together. For these reasons, I can only give you 4 stars.

I went to my company Xmas party and got quite drunk and ended up becoming the company slut, not that I am complaining! Lol

This theme is not for everyone. That said, you are one of the best in it. The story is well written and I particularly enjoy the teasing and small rationalizations about the lewd things going on. It is erotica and fiction and if you are a fan of cheating tales and keep your supspension of disbelief going you'll have great fun at a Clarkoverns' story.

I'd like to ask enraged middle aged white guys to calm down. not every story will involve a lesson for the cheating wife. this was a fun read.

Love the story, needs a chapter 2.

There are a few unbelievable bits, like her complying because she doesn't want to be a seeker, and her arse being slapped with her husband in the room and he doesn't hear. But lets face it if half this stuff happened half as much in real life as it does in our stories then we would all be a lot happier!

There wasn’t anything innocent about this wife. Innocent wives don’t become instant whores.

Yo Clarky good to see you back. I liked the under the bed scene. Way to go.

Love all your wife stories!

I always enjoy your stories. Next year's game or maybe the after-party should be the continuation of this. It would be ironic if Roger was the one she now can't wait to get fucked by even after finally getting Brad's cock. I hope you continue this

This was a little too quick. I enjoyed it immensely, but her slide into slut-wife was too quick and needed further development and backstory. Would love to see a redux or the next chapter.

Good story! I agree that you cold have gone slower w her becoming the slut wife. I would like to read more about the conversation w hubby at the after party.

Disagree about the wife’s “sudden” fall into slutdom. Once a wife or husband takes those initial, lessor steps, they are already close to the final plunge. Believing the spouse knows about the debauchery and brought her here to participate, as he is doing, just unties the knot.

The part that occurred under the bed was harder for me to follow and swallow, but what happened on the bed after wasn’t. Once the transgression is complete and dopamine floods the brain, all promises are off.

It will be interesting to see if her embarrassment and guilt cause her to avoid future entanglements at all cost, or....

need a husbands revenge story only fair

Frankly Michael was stupid not to tell her ahead of time. She should have yelled when Michael came in the room and claimed assault. It was in a way.

Now she has to come clean and use this game as contributing to her divorce. Either way they need to bring the company down. Or get one heck of a reference and severance package when he quits the job.

Excellent!

Would love to hear what happened one year later!

I agree with PervertedKnight on all three of his points. 4*

trash. contradictions abound as is true of the few stories of yours I've read. no more.

Solid story. Well written and enjoyable

A faithful wife suddenly becomes a slut? At the start, when she's first felt up, she does nothing so she wouldn't be caught? And she lets it go from there? Right into when Brad's in the room calling Beth's name & she says nothing? Beth sees him being sucked off, then believes, hearing 2 other women talking, that he's faithful? Say WTF?? Get the story line straight & make it more believable.

I totally agree with both Texican1830 & LilacQueen15 in their statements. Brad had to know what went on & still, not warning her, brought his wife. From the 1st time in the closet being felt up & doing/ saying nothing so not to get caught to under the bed when she could've yelled to her husband but didn't, along with Beth seeing Brad being blown by a co-worker, this is ripe for divorce action &/or Brad quitting his job and informing HR to the activities. I wonder if she ever admitted her actions, what his reaction was, and what she said to him about his blow job & not informing her of the "activities" in those yearly flings.

I've always loved your stories!! Your series are some of the best on literotica, and this one is hot as can be.

Great work, keep it up, ignore these stupid trolls who think you are trying to write a documentary about healthy marriage. What a bunch of losers lol

I was hoping the gps would come into play, like they would reveal that everyone was tracked and that Beth would be forced to watch with Michael as her location was with several other guys for who knows how long. Michael would have to play the trusting husband and assume she behaved herself. 🤭

What a great story!!!! I gave it 5 stars!!! I really enjoyed how Beth was sure that Michael had been fooling around at these retreats before and she started fooling around herself. Then she found out that he never cheated on her at these parties. What was she going to say now? Would she tell him the truth and beg for his forgiveness or would she keep things to herself and try to never go to the retreat again. She was a fool in this story.. I loved it. What an idea for a story. Very clever.

So many readers unhappy the story didn't turn out a certain way, or that the wife's fall from grace was too fast, or that she was never innocent to start with. Well, hey, this is fiction, the author is entitled to write whatever, and a dissatisfied reader can just move on. I liked the story, got the idea the wife was following her own desires and that she was mature enough to not get jealous of whatever her husband was up to, or not up to. Let her fuck--she doesn't need her husband's permission!

Love the story. Would like to see a part 2 on how she is going to break the news to him and how he takes that news. Can't wait till the next retreat

Poot ending for a story about a cheating wife......kind of expecting more closure then her getting away with it. Guess it might be too true to life. I prefer happy ending....like her getting caught or pregnant/caught.

Sorry you had a good story going then shit all over the ending

Complete nonsense.

stupid ,husband and whore wife.

It is amazing how many women turn into instant sluts on this site! I for one, want to give the fairer sex the benefit of the doubt. Women are complex. They constantly over analyze everything. This is due to an evolutionary trait, they picked up many centuries ago. A woman was not able to support herself. So she became very adept on picking up on verbal and non verbal cues. This helped her survive, in a harsh world. In my opinion, no woman who is happily married, goes to a party like this, and turns into a cheating slut. The possible downside for her, is too great. Now,,, if she already was cheating on hubby, it’s a possibility. But even then, she would know these guys would make her life harder, moving forward. At the end of the day, some things have not changed, from caveman times. Women still have a short window of time, to find a mate, start a family, before their looks start to fade. Leaving a known situation( your husband) for an unknown( your lover), assumes a lot of risk. If there are kids involved, it throws their life into turmoil as well. If a woman is grounded and level headed, she will be analyzing all this in her head, and possibly getting others opinions, before she dumps you. The problem is that most guys who marry, do so for the sex. They really do not “ vett” a prospective wife, well enough. If you look back, the signs were all, there. You just failed, to read them!

Great story! Five stars from me! Please give us a chapter 2. I'm sure there are more of the husband's coworkers that would love to get with Beth at the next retreat. Maybe a coworker that Michael doesn't like. Then let Roger get what he has been waiting for all year. Keep up the great work!!!

Yo - great read. Looking forward to next chapter

CONFESSION OR BRAIN FREEZE hahaha

Hope it cums soon!!!

Adolescent fantasy....the usual "normal wife turns into slut with just a little pushing".

OMG, your fantasy porn story was so unrealistic...because realism is why we come to a porn stories website? JFC, how much of this whinging is guilt over getting a nut while reading about another guy's wife getting fucked? It's ok, it's not you or your wife in the story...unless you put yourself there then that's your own issue. How much of our fucked up society is due to people repressing their sexuality?

How old are u? Looks like it was written by a horny co Ed with raging hormones all over the place. Suggest u please go back to school and study!

please use the story tags more. Include more so that it will red flag turn offs.

ffs

great fantasy, nice pacing and excellent tease. Thank you.

Wife finds herself pregnant and call Roger to tell him. He tells her meet him at his place where after a few minutes finds his cock buried balls deep in her ass. Wife then begins an affair with Roger. Brad suspects she is boinking Roger and tells her he will tell Mike if she doesn’t fuck him as well. Three kids and five years later she is still fucking Roger, Brad and Mike having been impregnated by each of them.

not a convincing story, but kind hot anyway. 3 solid stars

Story sucks; if you're a cuck and want your wife fucked by all your co-workers, you'll love it. Otherwise...? 1*

continue the story, its great

I keep checking back for a part two. This is a super hot story, ignore the haters.

You wrote and presented it well but I feel the story itself was weak. Maybe in a follow-up justice could be served on the cheaters.

How some readers passed 3rd grade is beyond me. She NEVER saw her husband being sucked by anyone. She assumed he took part until she overheard the two women say her husband was cute but always turned down female advances because of his loyalty to his wife.

People who don't trust and who cheat do not understand those who don't cheat and who trust. Michael never warned his wife because he didn't know about the rampant sex at the party. Sure women made passes at him because he was cute but he always turned them down. He realized some men would make passes at his wife but he trusted her to reject those advances - just as he did. None of the men (Brad, Donny, Roger) will tell on her. They will keep it secret in hopes of getting more in the future. Travis and Catherine won't tell because she didn't do anything with them.. She flashed them, but they might not actually realize it after giving each other oral and fucking after she left them.

So nice, I read it twice -- first time years ago and again today! I'd like to be invited to this party next year lol!

We need a part 2, this was amazing!

all your stuff is awesome

It's hot. Would be nice to see her with Brad, Donny and Travis again. May be series?

Awesome

Needs to be finished

Michael need to find out about his wife and so called work best friend

Both aroused and pissed.Feel for Michael.Wish it continued.Would like to

know how Beth deals with it.

Great story, loved it

Great story.

Kind of hard to blame her. He should have never let her play or at least told her what was going to happen and that he didn’t fuck around like everyone else.

Now, in the other hand, he could have wanted ti become a cuckold. In which case, good job.

I liked the writing, so I gave it a 5.

4+ [4.4 (☆☆☆☆+)].

Not sure I understand the wife. She had every opportunity to remove herself from each situation, yet never stepped away. In the meantime her husband was apparently true and searched for her.

Two weeks later she missed er period found she was pregnant with Mike’s bosses baby. The next year he they went to te party, Roger cornered her and reminded her about taking her ass.

Beth pulled out a picture of the baby and said, “rather have you give our son a brother” and smiled.

Roger mouth was moving but nothing was coming out.

Later that day Beth got her wish but it was a girl this time. However this time she had to have Roger a dozen times over the next month as Roger, true to his word took her ass twice that day.

Her husband brings her to this party knowing what kind of games they're playing. Meanwhile, he's staying true to his wife. She, on the other hand, allowed herself to be fucked by 4 guys. She should've been forwarned this was going to happen, maybe they shouldn't have even went. But she didn't try enough to stay away from having sex after some time, & even seemed to enjoy it.

I expected Michael to find his wife with one of the guys & blow a fuse. Didn't happen. The question is Michael's wink when asking if she enjoyed the game. Was he expecting her to have sex with those guys? Not my kind of story where the husband allows his wife to do that. For the writing, 3 stars Bob

Please, please write a part 2. This is one of the hottest stories on the site and I check back constantly to see if there's more.

Not a good payoff. Didn't seem like a husband who is faithful would take his wife to a retreat where everyone hooks up. It would make sense if Michael gets off watching and wanted to watch his wife get taken in front of him, but that never happened. It didn't seem like Roger was going to be the one to fully take Beth, it read as though it was gonna be Brad or the best friend. Maybe in part 2? I didn't like Roger, but it seems like the writer wanted it to be a swap. But I didn't like Roger and Brad seemed like the optimal choice to turn Beth into a slut. Michael seems too good but also an idiot, same with Beth. It was a good idea but that's it

Easily one of the hottest stories I've read on here, really hoping you will do a part 2. For some of the other commenters, my take on why Michael was faithful and brought her there was he wanted to bring up swinging but was afraid to. He figured if she had fun at the party and played that he'd be able to the next year and maybe they'd even open up to doing swinging. To the idiot that said she fucked 4 guys, you need to re-read the story. 1 fuck, 1 BJ, 1 grope and 1 watch.

Thank God it's fiction. A marriage like this would be sad. It would certainly be OVER if he ever found out. The problem with the mistakes naive or stupid is that you have to get PAST them to learn from them. Imagine the embarrassment that you trusted such a wife or the cynicism coming out of learning her behavior. That's why people divorce: self-respect. The price of the learning it high indeed.

she goes from a faithful wife to a free use cum dumpster in the course of one evening? Please? Even amateur gonzo porn has better plots than this.

So when he said that at the end he knew she was "cheating" since he knows all about the activity and never bothered to fill her in. So it was either a test or he wanted it. Either way I guess she passed since he didn't dump her.

Cutrent rating 4.16★s;

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clarkoverns,

you are an excellent erotic story teller!

I GAVE YOU A 5.0 = 100% (♥︎♥︎♥︎♥︎♥︎!)

clarkoverns you've been one of, if not the best writer on Literotica for over a decade now. I wish you wrote more but I'm grateful that you've written what you have!

Shit story, don’t pretend it’s not. The weakest plot, God help you

Glad you stopped writing here

Excerpt from the story (SPOILER ALERT!)

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... But before he could finish, Beth had already walked up to him and gotten on her knees. I hope you're having fun, Michael, Beth thought, because from now on, every day at work, whenever Donny looks at you, he's gonna remember the time your sweet innocent wife sucked him off.

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5 stars (4.75 = 95%, ★★★★★!)

clarkoverns is a very good erotic story teller: we learned so much about the wife's adventures on a page and a half.

This story was meant to be a mini fuckfest fantasy similar to the 1970s vintage softcore movies. It should be judged accordingly.

In my book this a five star story (4.65 = 93%).

I am copy pasting this comment because I really like it.

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affairtoremembe - over 2 years ago

Love your work!

Was hoping the fat old sleazy boss would get her! Hot stuff Clark!

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I also LOVE husband's boss & wife stories.

Another wonderful erotic story. A Master.

A weak minded spineless slut wife who’s attracted to every man but her own damn husband. Wouldn’t Michael be the best looking man there in her eyes?? He should be and hopefully is the best fuck too! After finding out her husband had been faithful she still cheats with Roger- pathetic!

Just another unknown cuck story in disguise..

DOL

well written fantasy – No need to look for believability there. Seems the wife had it in her to become a hotwife she just had to discover it – And the husband is very agreeable to that since he brings her to that retreat without ever a single word about what happens on these occasions. Even if he himself doesn’t dilly-dally, he clearly wants her to enjoy – Question is: will they talk openly about it or will she try to cover up? The question at the end clearly shows he wanted her to enjoy!

This STORY IS EXCELLENT, I gave it

a 5 (4.75 = 95%, ★★★★★!)

In my opinion the author intended to write a FuckFest story in which the female protagonist keeps getting fucked.

Essentialy clarkoverns wrote a soft porno story, in which he created a surreal world. Yet, I strongy believe the story is vagely based on true events.

WIFE AT THE COMPANY RETREAT.

Don't mess with Beth: she never forgets.

Excerpt from the story.

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... "I'm just glad it's you!" Brad whispered back.

Beth grinned. "Same here!" she said back. She didn't mind flirting a little bit with Brad — he WAS the handsomest guy at the office, after all. And standing with her back pressed up against his chest she could smell his woodsy cologne, which she loved.

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MY KIND OF WIFE SEX STORY! It is EROTIC and TRUE TO LIFE 2-in-1.

I GAVE YOU A 5.0 (100%.)

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I wish my wife had sex with Roger.

I LOVED THIS STORY VERY MUCH.

I believe the story was meant to be fictional, but it actually is a hiperbole of what is going on.

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My wife and I attended a number of similar retreats. I she knew how to suck up to tbe brass. She would find the CEO alone at a bench. She asked him whether she could join him. She wore her Daisy Dukes, cut-off shirt and short western boots. She actually was aggressively flirting with him.

We were among the last participants to lieve.

The CEO hugged her but she managed to kiss him on the lips.

Tbere is much more to my story. I hope you got the picture.

Well, that marriage is going downhill. She should have locked herself in the bathroom until the end, or screamed when she heard Michael. I hope she absolutely refuses to go next year, or handcuff herself to Michael and lock themselves in an empty room.