All Comments on 'Wife Swap Goes Wrong'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
Is she going to get revenge?

I would like to read another chapter on this story to find out what happens. Good story i enjoyed it all.Thanks for the post.....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Stupid people do stupid things.

YOu get all enamored over money and dont think things thru, she was a whore, she was paid to fuck and she fucked her way there. The husband should give her nothing but then again neither one of them talked to a lawyer or verified the contract. Oh well, stupid people do stupid things and this broad was a stupid as you can get. I am so glad it was in interracial where I would not have bothered to read it at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Couldn't say it better my self.

Except REALLY STUPID PEOPLE DO REALLY STUPID THINGS. The wife was a fool and the husband probably did the right thing. The only possible way the wife could have fixed the marriage is she should have told the husband straight away. Not let him find out on a porn channel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Actually

I don't care.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
was the husband in on the plot?

Is it possible that her husband set the whole thing up as a way to get rid of his wife?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Another slut wife who deserves the consequence!

Stupid is as, "stupid does"! Finally, one friggin slut who suffers at least some consequences. Well done!

roadbirdroadbirdabout 15 years ago
ok

she can take her copy of wife swap and sue the internet company for putting the film on the internet with no agreement from her...that should give her a cpl million tell hubby he can sue them for alienation of affection and he should get a cpl million...thing is they will have to take it off the net yes and pay damages but they will probably still make millions off the publicity it will generate...so she loses her hubbybut gets a cpl million he loses his wife but he gets a cpl million the porn producer has to pay them but still makes a cpl million so they all end up unhappy that one loses some money the others lose a spouse but then again they all make money....but then again now the hubby can find a nice white wife and have some normal kids ...hell be happy again he can give the half breeds to his ex wife and shell be happy...then she can marry the big dick porn star and they both can be happy ...unless helost money also by having to pay back to the site what they lose...still sounds like they all win huh

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Surprise and Amusement

Hot story with surprising and amusing twist. Think most of your readers will have a similar experience.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
This begs the questions:

What of the "wife" that stayed with the husband for a week? Where did the kids she cared for come from if the "father" was really a porn star? Did someone hire their kids out to a porno company for a week? How did the husband find the site with the wife's porno on it? The questions go on and on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
what gibberish nonsense

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Yikes.

Just another stupid story from a mindless writer. You're nothing but a parasite who pray on vunerable people and should be ashamed of yourself for writing such garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sadly,

typical racist shit... slutty black woman, big dicked black guy. The story would have gotten a good score if it had had white people throughout, but this is just racist shit.

ebyas89ebyas89about 11 years ago
loved it

This story was fucking amazing.fuck the haters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Is this all?

This story screams for a second part. Will it be written?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Revenge

The porn producer would find himself and his stud castrated and sleeping "with the fishes"

maninconnmaninconnover 8 years ago
This could be complete....

....but I'd like to read Shonna's ch. 2!

dculodculoalmost 8 years ago
Slut wife

this wife swap thing is good for niyla marriages styers cause it helps to show them where they can improve

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Doesn't Make Sense

A porn company not only tricks women into having sex but also does it under the guise of NBC? You realize that not only could Sholanda sue the company but also NBC? Plus whatever criminal charges might erupt from such a case.

Also, the porn company spends nearly a week pretending to be film crew for one session of sex? Why would they do that? That's a huge waste of time and money. Would be more efficient to just hire a porn actress and make a regular fake sex scene.

I'm sorry but this story is way too implausible for even a jack off story.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
That was good

Wasn't sure when it started, but I enjoyed that. A.little different take for the LW story. Almost unheard of to see anything but a stupid white woman as the foil for the story. Black women can be stupid whores too.

Rolando1225Rolando1225almost 4 years ago
I love it

Great story! Interesting plot and unexpected ending. I loved the end. Keep writing. Thanks for the story.

robinhodrobinhodalmost 4 years ago

Well, at least she knows who to sue now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Actually,anomnamous, they can sue the legitimate NBC (LNBVC), but cannot recover. Unless she can show a real line between LNBC and the fake NBC, there can be no recovery from LNBC. LNBC cannot bee held responsible for what a scam artist does posing as LNBC. It’s like I cannot be. Held responsible for teh actions of a bank robber who has then scams name as I do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

oh shit funny shit .

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