by Jackb120
I liked this story a lot until Alex got involved. I loved how the woman talked dirty. A DP with Jon and Lamar would have been great.
This was the dumbest pile of racist shit I have read in a month. The only way these black guys can fuck women is by drugging them?
That’s called rape where I’m from; but hell why not. After she gives birth to a half breed, she can try and figure out how to be a single mom because what black guy is going to stay with some white women he knocked up when he raped her?
And you want us to believe darkie managed to hold the same job for 20 years? The duck you say. The only job a black man csn hold for 20 years is a prison sentence.
See. We can do racism too.
"The story continues soon..."
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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns a rating of 1.
Amazing. She's so drugged she has no control but somehow remembers every single action is great detail. If you're going to do something that inconsistent, DON'T write in 1st person.
As typical, asshats complaining about a free story a writer has worked hard on for a week. Entitled asshats always complain but never produce anything themselves. 5 stars thanks for the great effort. Thanks Buster2U
That is not what I expected when I read "tricked into cheating". I read the story as I always wondered how someone could be tricked into cheating. I expected maybe the husband blindfolded his wife or something. This is being drugged. Not in the sense she is out cold or paralyzed. But she was drugged and since she knows exactly what she was doing and did it anyway then it was cheating to me and I do think she has a case to say she was raped. They would say willing but if she gets blood tested soon enough they find drugs in her system and whatever she says will win.
Of course the Asian guy has to be short, emasculated, and oh wait he's gay too? Suprise, surprise.
I hope you will have many more in this series, and lets see if she actually ends up black bred.
Great story, I gave it 5 stars! Cant wait for chapter 2. This read as if it was a true story. Is it? I'm hoping so.
Gave it a 5, as I know how important ratings are, Invite you to read some of mine we write in similar veins.
A good story for sure. Four guys and one wife of none of the men in the room. That was the point I say you are crazy and should have had her on her toes against the wall and doing her.
Started great and went bad jest as fast. I'm not into gay stuff at all, one star.
Truth is, I would STILL divorce her despite the drugs given the demonstrated lack of judgement putting herself in that situation. Imagine... would you want your children depending for their well-being on a mother with this lack of judgement? Hell, no. Excellently written tale of an unworthy wife. Getting drunk or high if a woman with family responsibilities on a business trip is about the stupidest thing one could do. Men too, actually. The author should finish his stories for a better story cycle. Otherwise, the prose is wasted. Look at Ohio or the like for examples.
If John and Mary are examples of 20 and 10 year consultants to the government, no wonder the country is in the mess it is.
If Jon is such a stud, why did his wife divorce him? He is forlorn and upset about the divorce so he must have not believed he did anything wrong. The woman was a slut and the 3 black guys were rapists. The Asian guy was only in the story to be insulted.
Let hubby find out everything and get revenge on all of them, including the loving wife
Good story. Don't know why people go to smut sites and get upset when they read smut.
Well don't stop now. Even better if she isn't on birth control and can't get a Plan B pill.