All Comments on 'Wife's Cheating Time'

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but don't see where this thrown together story is erotic or entertaining. It's just boring.

I think we all better start getting right with God because the end of the world can't be too far off.Even for a twisted teen age boy this is sick.Fly's crawling on shit is real and just as erotic! So bad it is disturbing!

all the stories on this site about how to get over and no consequences if a woman cheats or betray her spouse.you got to be gay man or woman,that all you read on this site now.the manhater site.

nothing of literary value in this story.

The fisting part must have been the most exciting for you.

dude, this crap is getting so deep; this is in the top 10 of the worst, most boring, least sexy, piece of crap that I've ever read. Other than that, it wasn't too bad

completely so unrealistic that as a sex story ...id rather be playing golf

and i hate golf

I hope the person in the story dies a slow painful death of aids or ends up getting pregnant 58 times. i know this might sound strange but as you say you are gay how on earth do you know how a man feels when he is having sex as I assume you have never had sex with a man you can't know. By the same token I will never know what it's like to have sex with a man therefore I will never write about it. I agree with all the other comments not erotic at all and yes yet another man hater.

But then what can you expect when a fudge packer tries to write a loving wife story! Stick to what you know

I see this was your first story - let's hope it is your last. Pathetic and unbelievable. I can't even give you a rating for having the guts to post it. Try writing a lesbian story next time. Stick to something you know about.

Tolerable, I suppose, as a stroke story but not that interesting as a work of fiction.

Just for the record, someone being a lesbian doesn't mean they have never fucked a guy. A lot of lesbians go both ways, hence the class bi.

you are a better talent than this submission

The "writer" has no talent and very little knowledge of the basics of writing, such as grammar and punctuation. The concept of the story is one that has been done a thousand times, revealing the "writer's" lack of imagination and the story line development sucks. It's about as erotic as a migraine headache and only a complete moron would like this "story." Wimps will get a little thrill out of it, but even those pathetic ones won't get too much from this. BTW, Bub, if lesbians were bi-sexual, they wouldn't be called lesbians. What a fool, calling others morons when he himself is the very picture of one. LOL

There were some obvious errors, such as the idea that someone could be fucked for almost 72 hours straight and not be in a hospital somewhere. Not too mention the potential for STD's and if hubby was so freaking rich, why take a taxi, why not a limo and where are all the servants? I did like the fact that she divorced her husband. Shows some idea of class.

Plot? What was the point? Character development was one-dimensational.

Written by someone who says they are Gay not Bi. It has nothing to do with love must less a wife. It was a wanker story of no meaning at all. Just a waste of time to put in loving wives category.

Seems I upset someone and for the record I do know or have known Bi-woman and lesbians and they tend to be in two camps 1) Bi woman shag anything they can they generally just want to have as much sex as they can or at least the woman that I know do although I will point out that many of them are more loyal than many 'straight' friends both male and female. 2) Almost every lesbian that I have known does not hate men they just don't give a shit about them they pay as much attention to us men as we men pay

to say knitting or embroidery and believe me lesbians do not have sex with men or at least the woman I know or have known do not. And if you are going to make a personal attack get your facts right.

I OFFER MY APOLOGISE IF YOU ARE A BI-WOMAN OR LESBIAN

MY OPINION IS BASED ON THE PEOPLE I HAVE MET AND THEIR OPINIONS. IF YOU HAVE DIFFERENT OPINIONS AS I'M SURE YOU DO GOOD ON YOU MY VEIWS DON'T MEAN ANYTHING. AND LASTLY GAY,STRAIGHT,BI,LESBIAN IT DOES NOT MATTER AS LONG AS YOU ARE HAPPY WITH WHO AND WHAT YOU ARE.

MY PROBLEM WITH THIS STORY IS THAT THE WRITER SEEMS TO HAVE A GRUDGE AGAINST MEN PERHAPS I'M WRONG BUT THAT IS MY IMPRESSION OF THIS STORY.

Not worth the time to read. Please don't bother writing in LW.

this is not even a good wank story. not worth it. there so much more better wank stories on this site.

for all of you just wanting a quick story to fuck off to this isn't it, i like a longer story i liked it very much.

A complete pile of dog shit.

...Marathon girl...you go girl...the imagination runs wild...obviously everyones' health is checked long before this commitment...if they want to be part of a nymphomaniac's life...where can I get in line...???!!!...this lady knows how to enjoy life...something you deadheads can't focus on...keep up the excellent work...and please let me be your Mike...my dimensions are longer...and thicker...my endurance is also marathon...looking for you all my life...ppuuullleeeaaassee respond...I need a lot of this...!!!...XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO:)

Hubby needs to come home find her shot in bed with all her boyfriends fingerprints all over the house.............

i am not sure how i feel about the story, but the husband owes mike a thank you. she losses the security and he [husband] loses an grossly unfaithful wife. why would mike think she would be any different? he encourages her ?

he's got the money, husband can easily replace her if that what he wants, but i would hope not.

and those pesky std's and such.

What a boring little story - instruction manuals for Chinese products are far more entertaining

she gets caught, with audio and video;and she gets booted from her present married situation. maybe even an std? today i am just a curmudgeon in such things. she gets tossed and has a job to easily fit into w/o any adjustment

As others have said, glad this sick idiot has quit submitting this garbage. Seriously, is this asshole related to www or bonnietaylor [and the other flawed inbreeds?]. It totally sucked.

LUCKY HUSBAND AT LEAST SHE DIDN'T SLEEP WITH THE DOG OR DID SHE.

sure you are not an Andreas ?

She's just a cheating slut with no moral value and I may as well ad brain dead.

Honey next time invite me..

need a few days of fucking

whew! I'm exhusted just reading this! for a gay woman you sure do fantasize about fucking men in every possible way!

It could have been a good story with just a few guys. However, when extreme, it appears perverted; not sexy.

could this be a true story, wishful thinking or just fiction, Is some parts accurate or good imagination. TK U MLJ LV NV FOR ALL AUTHORS WHO DISLIKE NEGATIVE COMMENTS.....think of it like WELL AT LEAST I HAVE ANOTHER READER. In marketing that adds up to a sale or publicity. mlj

This is a hot story. I hope she gave AIDS to all her lovers, because let's face it, they deserved it just as much as they deserved her infectious pussy.

With any luck you've died from aids years ago.

Fucking cheating whore slut.

slobbering on the thick rod, his ass full of stiff cock, betrayed!

I think this is a great story. My husband travels for work and I have had a few weekends like this. All the stupid comments here about plot or how dare a married women do this to her husband, do you people know what this site is about? Go back to church and stay off the world wide web, the world has passed you by!

This piece of shit whore needs to eat shit and die!

It looks like there was a contest within LIT for the most sex per weekend, and this was the winner! Else why would Sweetie have such an exact count of number of her orgasms, loads of cum consumed, number of males serviced, and which orifices were tapped, etc. ? Kinda like 'The Count' on Sesame Street! But goo-ier!!!

In the very worst sense of the word. I hope that the conclusion is that your poor husband divorced you before you gave him every disease known to man. Epic slut. Epically bad story. Even for fiction.

Pussy must be maggot mush.

Glad you stop writing. You deserve a good case of v.d.

Sick story by a sicko writer.

...from every reality. Honestly: It read as if I were merely watching ten or twelve 5-minute-porns..no storyline, nothing happening, - just a description of many little episodes and a husband who is pityful stupid.

Boring. Nothing of interest here.

what a load of crap

have any meaning to this female. TK U MLJ LV NV

Sorry but you are out of loop perhaps generational thing. Decades past Helena Montana became gay-lesbian central for state. Yearly parade, tried to make a blue collar bar their ''Cheers''. Older quite sexually active female and regular customers took exception. She refused them service lawsuits followed - acrimonious fight went round for round on front page of paper for months.

Homosexuals lost. I have worked with gay males and lesbians. Revered programming instructor at Helena college of technology - phd math prof westpoint - was married to man but openly had lesbian lover.

University in Missoula eruptedbin violence - was impossible to get truth.

My nephew's wife had troubles with him...actually so did I but kept my distance when she flirted with me at family gatherings. She was discreet around others - just pleasant. brief conversations, then one afternoon I came out of basement bathroom at parent's house. There she stood, snaps unfastened on western cut shirt...tails had been tied exposing midriff but now all was exposed...I had seen glimpses of bra throught the day but it now was stuffed in her back pocket. I quickly averted my gaze and tried to move past her...telling her whatever she planned was not going to happen.

Maybe 5 foot 100 pounds...absen breast she might weigh in at 80. ''I'm going to suck you hard then I'm going to do the titfucking. Either that or I rip this pocket off and scream rape!'' She held up a destroyed bra. ''Who will John believe? He hates you, you know!''

As I was trying to extricate myself, voices were heard through the open window well window. John was asking about here and someone replied she was with me. I scooted past her, and she closed door I guessed to fix her clothes. No idea how, but when I headed home that night her bra was on my front seat.

Point I am trying to make is her overt heterosexuality. Her marriage declined as she spent time with older female co-workers. Half a year later she was living with them as a lover of oneof them.

Divorce finalized ran into her in bar one night. She thought being divorced from John would change my mind. That it did.

Spent weekend together - her last man - and she told me about national organization of lesbians that recruits and turns young females. Highest valued targets were married late teens early twenties with kids. Bi-monthly seminars educating the tricks of the turning. Numerous psychologists prepared the seducers. Many were marital counsellors pretending to work towards fixing marriage but actually destroyed many marriages.

If a member of organization became attracted to a very happily married co-worker, she would be subtly swarmed...actual word for technique of completely over time patiently completely changing person but it escapes me.

Gay males are result of genetic mixup. All humans begin as XX females...the drop the tail become XY male. Sometimes nature goes OOPS!

However, lesbians have no genetic mis-wiring. Many were sexually assaulted or raped at young age. Hatred grows and arelationship with male is psychologically abhorent. These organizations ignore law and often cull barely pubescent girls from the herd. Provide comforting shoulder after first heartbreak by her Romeo. Introduce to others who share their stories of betrayal by males. Pretty easy to convince her those horrid males only want her as conquest. All males are liars and cheats...

When at all female parties where everyone has been scorned the tenets of the lesbo religion are reinforced. One night, a little to much to drink, a little X, a comforting hug becomes a kiss on the cheek, the nose, slight pressure during first kiss...proclamations of love...perhaps not that night but little by little the desire is cultivated.

The seducers are extremely skilled and educated in the ''turning'' art.

Your claim that they are not man haters is questionable. A teenage boy has neither experience or control to sexually pleasure a young female better than another educated and skilled female lover.

Added important factor NO PREGNANCIES!!

LAST I HEARD, HAVRE IS CENTER FOR MONTANA CHAPTER OF ORGANIZATION.

For some reason, John's ex-wife regularly converses with me. She endured two horrible break-ups because she metwith me. One was pphysically violent and put her in hospital.

I have emphatically told her, for her safety and that of her children to stay away but she refuses. She uses visit with her parents as cover and shows up at my back door after dark.

A lesbian female depicting all not yet turned sisters as out

of control slut

Can't argue with the majority commenting here. This story about just another whore sucked.

...... just fucking..... that's all

Is she a super porn hero? She must be since she did that many people in such a short period of time. She’s Super Slut the Whore of Cuckville. How ridiculous and pathetic. This one makes the Covid virus seem nice. If this was a real person they would in the health department weekly get shots and creams. So bad it makes one wonder if the writer got her vibrator stuck in her ass on high

Just another stupid Cuckold story. One word describes this story and that is "SAD".

Yikes. I mean, I can get down with slutting out like a whore, but this is so extreme it would be considered gross to even the dirtiest of minds. I enjoyed reading certain parts, but would've kept this one to myself. Not kink shaming though. If this is your thing, more power to you. But like I said, wouldn't have shared if it were me.

A raunchy piece of shit probably written by a 15 year old pimple faced jerk-off in his mother's basement. 1 star.

Absolute rubbish, l so enjoyed giving your stupid story 1/5

Go back to your real job and stay there.

Now listen up, Andrea. I think you have talent as a writer. Your storyline isn't exactly my thing but you have definite potential. But the comments below . . . I read many of them and I haven't laughed that hard in ages. Especially after the comment that predicted your story will bring about the end of the world. When a writer provokes such strong reactions she must be doing something right. Stay strong.

Moronic. Andrea, girl, only 1 in 10 men have a cock that is 6" or longer (measured on the dorsal side). The mean is 5.17", and if you understand normal distributions, you can see that the standard deviations are such that a true 8" cock is a 1 in a 1,000 or so occurrence. A true 10" is probably 2 orders of magnitude rarer. That's why guys who are huge that you see in porn appear again and again. They are few and far between.

Did you study geometry? A cock that is 4" wide, if modelled as a cylinder, would have a circumference of almost 12.5". Not only does that not exist, no woman would want it, let alone accommodate it. Trying to shove something like that into your cunt would result in an immediate, rushed trip to the emergency room.

The plot was simple minded, but even a simple minded plot can be good if it is well developed. In your case, the plot was ridiculous.

The writing mechanics were good.

How is this even remotely entertaining or in the L/W category? Group sex or E/C….A bunch of fucking and a rich husband that could I am sure find a wife that is not a potential diseased scum bag slut….

She won't be loving it when the diseases show up. No chance that she doesn't get something. What she gets for sure is a divorce. Ugly woman, ugly story

If this's your writing, please don't. Not worth the time reading, & I skimmed. 1 star

Complete total trash. Find another hobby.

An old Internet term applies to this story 10/10: ACPOTI - Anyone Can Post On The Internet. And just because you can, does not mean you should. This story doesn't even rise to piss-poor, much less bad writing. ANON below clearly describes the "thick" 4-inch wide penis in the story as being the diameter of a coffee can. Dumb on steroids.