by sexysue401
You have a good style. Your writing is crisp and paced well.
All the best,
Dave
Great story. I have always loved a great gangbang….fucking multiple guys with huge cocks….love to have my cunt, mouth, and ass fucked by as many cocks as possible. I always tell the guys to not cum in my cunt because I wasn’t on birth control. They would laugh then fuck me harder and cum even greater. Of course I was lying to them, but it made having sex that much better and creamier and wilder.
i liked the premise but only four stars because the writing style was not to my liking.
I think there is a great deal that could be unpacked from this story, though it was very enjoyable. /i want a prequal or two, setting up what she was up to while he was gone for 6 months. I want to know how things transpired the first 15 min she went into the "Jon". A good follow up with the aftermath, any the second GB to follow.
Why didn't they have sex before they went to dinner? Why didn't they just stay home and have sex? How horny did she get and what did she do about it while he was gone? What did he do to take care of himself? Too many questions especially why did the gang bang get started? Rape is a powerful word and police is another.