by Hammerdown15
But those of us that have hunting for years and had wives in the camping area have enjoyed the sites and sounds. thanks for the flashback 5
This is a site for fiction and fantasy.
You wrote a good story.
This is not about reality.
If anons dont like cuckold and unfaithful wives and husbands.
Why are they reading from this section
Another POS author with nothing to say has discovered the delete button for any comment daring to call crap crap. You suck cuck.
Been hunting for thirty plus years, and.haven't seen a gangbang yet.
I love camping/hunting stories. I might have enjoyed a bit more intro as an attempt to make it believable. A moment or two to get a better mental image of the wife. Maybe just a bit more hesitancy, and easing into it. It got me off tho, so mission accomplished!
I understand the need for some exposition. But again we're only too familiar with the genre . I personally enjoy a lot of quick 'cuts' between hot, nasty scenes. Like an action movie. Keep up the good work.
Your story reads a bit like an outline or wish list. I think if you flesh it out a little (pun intended) it would be really hot.
Just as dumb the second time. My thought is that anyone other than a cuck would be haunting two legged animals.