All Comments on 'Wife's First Hunting Trip'

by Hammerdown15

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yep a "little" over the top

But those of us that have hunting for years and had wives in the camping area have enjoyed the sites and sounds. thanks for the flashback 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good job

This is a site for fiction and fantasy.

You wrote a good story.

This is not about reality.

If anons dont like cuckold and unfaithful wives and husbands.

Why are they reading from this section

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another POS

Another POS author with nothing to say has discovered the delete button for any comment daring to call crap crap. You suck cuck.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Been hunting

Been hunting for thirty plus years, and.haven't seen a gangbang yet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
good for JO

I love camping/hunting stories. I might have enjoyed a bit more intro as an attempt to make it believable. A moment or two to get a better mental image of the wife. Maybe just a bit more hesitancy, and easing into it. It got me off tho, so mission accomplished!

ThalamirThalamirover 4 years ago
I enjoyed your fast cuts between scenes

I understand the need for some exposition. But again we're only too familiar with the genre . I personally enjoy a lot of quick 'cuts' between hot, nasty scenes. Like an action movie. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good start

Your story reads a bit like an outline or wish list. I think if you flesh it out a little (pun intended) it would be really hot.

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Just as dumb the second time. My thought is that anyone other than a cuck would be haunting two legged animals.

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