All Comments on 'Wife's Sister Wants Another'

Good brother in-law breeding his Sister in-law

Hope she winds up with a baby bump.

Thank you . I'm looking forward to chapter 2.

Very good story put together well My only critique is who wears underpants or a bra under their pajamas? But the story will have me going back and checking out tour previous submissions

A nice variation of your other story about a sister-in-law who wants to be knocked up. This one is better because of the economy of backstory, and more time focused on the sex.

Part 2??

5 Stars. God, what a lucky guy. Hope you continue and maybe see if she indeed gets pregnant.

Keep it going. How is she going to make her getting knocked up time up with her husband, since he's ignored her. Then obviously, the sister and BIL have to get into raking her husband over the coals for being so dumb.

Now how does she explain that to her dickhead husband?

(2/13/2023) This rewrite of “WIFE'S NEGLECTED SISTER” was much better than the original. I gave this version five stars but had to give the other only three because of the abrupt ending.

He is one lucky guy be able to have a baby and not with his wife cause his wife didn't want 1 he is still a lucky guy

Looks like the sister-in-law is going to have to rush home from this trip and seduce her husband. The story would be better if they didn't need drugs to get in the mood for sex. He lusts for her she wants a baby that ought to be more than enough to get them in bed together.

needs a part 2 where she leaves the husband and somehow the sister is ok with it all and they all live together.

Interesting story, but it feels a little rushed. Also, it needs editing.