by mav99
I got so wet reading this story. I do not have a dildo, so I fucked myself with a hair brush. It made me cum. I loved the story.
as compared to the *sexually explicit* stories I have read up til now, it was great. I DO have a vibrator that I use while reading these stories, and sometimes I can read the whole thing and still not get off. well this time I can definitely say different. I only got to the part where the guys were begging Kelly in the truck. I couldnt take anymore. Job well done. Though these type stories only get me off in writing. If I was in that situation (and believe me I have been many times) it would totally be a turnoff and I would forever think of those men in a negative light.
I think the reason the reviewers either hate this story or love it is that it's a good story, but needs work. I think if you expand on the story line and concentrate on your writing skills it could be a great one.
This was too short but it was very good. I hope you write more about your wife.
I had to mastubate while reading this story and came twice before it ended, keep up the writing
First, let me say, that despite a limited style the story was very erotic. Let it be a lesson You got a sense for an erotic scene add some tension or conflict and go with it.
The strange part,yes. It seems that the rating splits along how shall i put it... how welll each reader did when he/she were reading your story and before the story so abraptly finished... By all means, work on convincing your wife to tell you more (maybe invent some - I don't care...)
Make more popcorn so we.can hear more of when your wife first realized she was a whore.