All Comments on 'Wife's Unusual First Time'

Well written love it.

This was a great read, I can only hope this was a true story and not just a fantasy. The thought of Kathy fucking Jack so many times and even his friends was very exciting. To bad that wasn't true or ways it?

I've been very lucky to have a wife who loves to be shared. She's been with many men and we can't imagine it stopping anytime soon. Our sex life has been off the charts since we've started her being shared. To me that is the true definition of "Loving Wife".

For those who will disagree please keep your comments to yourself. I mean what the hell are you doing here reading these stories if this doesn't turn you on??? So keep the stories coming newbie and I'll keep reading them.

Totally realistic. Very, very erotic.

The wife is a keeper.

I had a similar fantasy:

Years ago i had a day job (full time, perm.) & my own small business where i had a permanent worker. One of them was 30, single, he only dated women older than him. He was from my wife's town. My wife was 12 years his senior. At 42 she looked 35, not a day older. Men were attracted to my wife like flies to honey! I had already discovered my own voyeur side & my most favorite sexual fantasy was for my wife to fuck another man, to enjoy sex with him, and afterwards tell me she loves me and beg me to take her back unconditionally! "Please take me back and assure me you don't love me any less. Give me a chance to make you happy... Whatever i have done, i did it for both of us..."

My fantasy never came true. I wish i could truthfully say it did.

maybe that's why your in your 50's, and divorced? If your "husband" encouraged you to fuck other men, then you didn't lose much of a marriage. Hope you do better with the next one.

It extremely hard to resist a hard young life very when your husband encourages it and you end up having too much wine and sexual stimulation. I've been on the receiving end of a few unsolicited sexual encounters with my husbands blessing.

:-)

Cheating wives are better in bed & they love to fuck.

Their husbands are lucky mo|h€*-£u@k€*s & i envy them.

Never knew there were so many sewer rats in loving wives. Unwashed perverts. By all means start a new category for these sick mother fuckers.

I am kind of cucky love eating wife after she has been tucked by others

I would have ate her every time she was fuck by him

My husband and I had a somewhat similar experience with a younger neighbor.

It can happen! Ours took place in our pool and hot tub though. Some wine helped

change the mood. the subject of sex came up and several glasses later I was soon

topless, which lead to my husband removing my bottoms after we dared him he didn't have the nerve!... Well I was wrong...

So it can does happen......so please add the next chapter... We all want to know

how far they take it

It means he's very secure about his own manhood. He loves watching me being fucked. He just enjoys the show and I enjoy all the bonus sex! I love my hubby even more afterwards. You guys who hate these stories are just jealous.

Sometimes extra sex, partners or a combination of sex with another couple leads to a perfect marriage with even more love. Five stars makes you need to keep this story going with at least one or two more people taking on the wife.

I love this story. I saved it so I can jerk when I really need to bust my nuts. So fucking erotic. Loved how the kid keeps pushing then slides his cock home. She was resistant, but it felt too good. I imagine that's how my wife Luke be.

To those not liking these stories, don't read. Why read and rate bad and leave a comment?

I loved the story. The ending was a real splash of cold water and kind of a downer.

and raves like some girl-man fag is worst dear annony!! Gave this a 5 to offset your retarded 1 vote

Idiot. Any guy that WANTS his wife to fuck another man is a fool

And swinging the day away. Five fucks and five stars. Swinging is truly a great deal of interesting sex acts. . .trust me, I know.

The only problem with this story was the ending. Why'd the wife cut it off when she was enjoying it? She should have continued the relationship with the young man, and have him come over and spend the night screwing her while the husband watched. Even better would be if she went off her BC and let the young man get her pregnant while the husband watched.

What an amazingly erotic story. I loved it

Seeing all the comments goes to show there is a following for spouse watching. So its 'horses for courses'.

Personally when a teenager I was very close to a neighbour, a friend of my mothers. Mum knew I was talking to her as there are some things you cant talk to parents about. Conversations were passed between them about me my neighbour told me to put my Mums mind at rest.

But what the neighbour never told Mum was that she was giving me 'hand jobs' but she wouldn't let me make love to her. Needless to say I tried it on. It took ages of pleading for me to get my hands into her knickers. Looking back I think she thought it was a charitable duty. She was married and said love making was for 2 in a relationship. She taught me how to make her climax and she loved that. The most important thing she taught me was about the clitoris.

I joined the Army, married and had children. Mum, Dad and neighbour still lived in the same place. Needless to say I went back to see my parents and often popped into see the neighbour.

One day reminiscing I bought our conversation round to my sex education. She smiled and I said jovially 'any chance of a repeat'. She opened her mouth and said 'you have a young pretty wife who will be doing that for you, why'. Not the answer I expected but not a refusal. Said 'for old times sake', she said 'a one off or more'. Cheekily said 'more'. Her reply 'why, I'm older, put on weight and parts are going south, why'.

She was right, so I took her in my arms and kissed her. No resistance. Ran my hands down her back and caressed her bottom. We came up for air and she said 'you're still a naughty little boy', nodded and said 'not so little now', she laughed.

She gave me a single kiss and said 'you've 2 hours before my husband comes home so be gone before then, deal, okay', 'deal, want to shake on it', She said I'll be shaking something else in a minute.

We went up stairs to the matrimonially bedroom, she said she would change in the bathroom, I said 'no, I've waited a long time for this to see your body'. We kissed and started to undress each other the climbed into bed. Well we played with each other and I reminisced of years gone by. Her hands were still as gentle, her clitoris was still as active and I brought her to a climax.

We cuddled I kissed her on the lips then boobs then made my way down to her tummy. She pulled me up and said smiling 'what was your request, can't remember negotiating more', I said 'well, you refused me years ago, because of my Mum. Do you still have these intimate chats with Mum about me and shorely you wont refuse me now that I'm an adult', with a cheeky grin.

'Adult' she said 'never, you'll always be a naughty boy', pushing my head down said 'get on with it, the clocks ticking'.

Carried on kissing down her tummy and on to her pubes, licked my way into her pussy and tongued my way to her clitoris. Sucked, licked and went through the alphabet, never got as far as 'z' before her climax hit her and her juices were on my tongue.

Raised my body above her, she opened her legs wider raising her knees I entered her in the missionary position. Our love making continued and I bought her to another climax before my climax.

We cuddled up and I caressed her boob, she said 'that's not happened for a long time, thank you', 'my pleasure' I said.

She said with a snigger 'don't leave it so long again. Lets exchange phone numbers, I'll text you hubbies movements, you be here soonest', 'yes Mam', I answered.

Moving off the bed she said 'now get out, before I phone your mother and tell her what you've done you naughty boy', and kissing me.

I dressed and she put her dressing gown on and saw me to the door. Kissing goodbye she said 'thought you wanted a hand job to reminisce about old times'.

'Yes' I replied 'you failed' I said 'final written warning, for breach of contract, next time I would like you to pay me the same complement I paid you'.

With her tongue in her mouth she said 'you've got it, now go, I need a shower'.

We met the following week and most weeks and still do. My wife doesn't suspect but receive some funny looks from mother.

Keep on writing, please.

lol at the f@ggit comment below about eating another mans cum. You beta cuckolds really need to man up.

Loved this story,so plausible with the young friend,the wife becoming more "friendly" with the drink,the daring,the request to lay down to be more comfortable,then the wife becoming caught up in the situation and actually fucking him !!!!!!!! wow,then him cumin inside her and the husband fucking her full pussy,exactly what I'd love my wife to do

Do like this, now is the time to take things further, a nice little MMMF or perhaps a FMF with a bit of girly action, it always does it for me. I do wish that people who express opinions against the events taking place in these stories always post them anonymously, at least grow a pair and leave a name.

You should have cleaned her pussy with your mouth. My wife's lover filled my wifes pussy with a huge load. His cum was spilling around the sides of his huge cock while I licked it all.

He slept in our bed, but later in the night I heard her begging him it was hurting too much. He had a good eight inches in her virgin back door. He fucked her ass until he had all ten inches in her. She cried all the time. He filled her tight hole again until it came out around his big, thick cock.

My part was to suck it all out of her.

Fantastic. Hopefully you can get her to follow through with the other things she told you that turned you on so muck. You know she only told you those things because she wants to do them.....Tell her you want it too.

great story i am a long time reader, and this was one of the best

Be real. If you really love her, you wouldnt share her.

Its all in your mind and most likely you are not even married anyway. I understand that this stories are just fantasies but, as a man, to diminish tourself? Whatkind of piece of shit are you people?

Why not make yourselves the big man? Or the ladies man...

And what is with all these women being 5-2? Thats pretty short people. Are you men that write, are all of you midgets? Or you have no concept of height....

So in your future writings try to find out what is the true high of a normal woman.

If you think this can't happen . . . think again.

Its something most will never experience. And maybe they should not.

But if you do you will never forget it.

good fuck story, love it when a gal gets some strange cock and her husband likes it.

I know it's just a story, but a guy making himself a cuck? What a sorry SOB.

to all the nay Sayers if your so repulsed by this then why did you read it?

sharing your wife is so erotic.....I have been sharing my wife ,the love of my life, for over 20 years. I cant imagine it any other way.....

I'll never forget the first time I shared my wife with another man, not if I live to be 1,000 years old! Unfortunately, I wasn't there to see him get her, but I knew where she was, who she was with and what they were doing, which made my dick so hard it was painful. The guy had been trying to fuck her for months, and I finally was able to convince her that I really wanted her to give it to him. He was very afraid that either his wife or me would find out, but his dick was so hard for her that he couldn't back out. Her pussy was very red and leaky when she got home, and it was all I could do to keep from shooting my load as soon as I got in her pussy. That was one of the hottest afternoons we've ever had, and I am STILL sharing her with other men!

I can't believe people like to watch their wife fuck dime one else...

For me that is unforgivable mistake which only divorce as the out come...n with the prenup infidelity Claus..she wouldn't get a dime out of me...

and had to puke. I can just imagine what the rest of this shit is like. 1*

I actually would have given this a 6 but it wasn't available.

Yes fantasy word, but we (a lot of readers) do not get erection to dream about somebody fucks their wife/girlfriend/fiancée.

A lot of readers dream about such fantasy where the ex husband finds better woman than the previouse (now) ex wife was and the previouse (now) ex wife is a BTB woman...........and the husband reached better rate than 50% in the divorce..........sometimes it is very good fantasy dream when the extramarital lovers of the ex wives become BTB too..........

You are probably right.

However, we are talking fantasies here. In the fantasy world anything is possible.

THE STORY: 5 *s [4.25/5.0 = 85/100 = A]

is more interesting

For several months my X had been fucking our neighbor about once a week but he didn't know that I knew about it. I had asked her a few times if I could watch them. She didn't want him knowing that I knew, she said it made him very excited to think that they were fucking behind my back, and she didn't want to spoil that. Well, after hounding her a little more, she devised a plan. She was going to tell him that she wanted to fuck him while I was asleep in the our bed. The plan was that she would go to his place and tell him that we had been out drinking and that I was so drunk I would never wake up. I told her to go for it.

A couple nights later, after we had come home from a movie, she said she was going to do it. I got into bed and got comfortable while she went to his place. In about twenty minutes she came back with him. She got naked and slid into bed. He was only wearing a robe and dropped it on the floor and very carefully slid in bed next to her. As she whispered to him that I was dead to the world, she nudged me a couple times to show him. I laid there motionless as he sucked her nipples and fingered her pussy while she stroked his cock. Soon they were both breathing hard.

I watched as he slid on top of her. As she spread her legs, he slowly slid his cock into her. She moaned and told him how good his cock felt in her. He kept shushing her, telling her she was going to wake me. As he slowly fucked her, she would raise up to meet each stroke. Soon she was telling him "faster, faster, fuck me hard, I love your cock". Soon he had thrown caution to the wind and was fucking her fast and furious. They were both moaning and grunting.

Finally, as they were really going at it, I moved and re positioned myself. He stopped dead and just froze, deep in her pussy. When I didn't move any more, they began again. Slowly at first then faster and harder until he finally thrust hard into her an let out several muffled grunts as he injected her with his sperm. He laid there fully in her pussy for a couple minutes until she told him that he had better go. He told her that he would see her tomorrow. As soon as he had left the room, We moved together and as we contacted, I could feel the wetness of her pussy against my cock. I reached down and as I touched her clit, she begged me to eat her pussy. She said he had given her more cum tonight than ever before.

I turned around to face her pussy and as I began to lick her labia, she told me that he had fucked her quick when she had gone to bring him over. That he had cum in her twice tonight, like he had the first time he had fucked her. She loved having me lick and suck her pussy after she had been fucked. Whether it was my cum in her or that of a couple other guys.

I don't know if this is a true story or not, but either way, it's 10 times more believable than most you read on her. I really enjoyed it!

Sounds to me like Jack need to have his kneecaps carressed... By a STEELPIPE... That's how he repaid the hospitality he was shown? He always felt welcome there when he was younger, and he repays that by fucking Mike's wife behind his back, even letting his friends fuck her, and all bareback? Jack should get a pubic haircut, Bobbitt-style.

You did good man, there's drama and excitement in this, though you'd be hard pressed to capture the same kind of feeling intensity in a follow up, do it any way! ten out of ten.

Truly Shocked to read this perverted story!

What is this?

An erotic, perhaps even porn site?

O-Boy,

Can't wait to enjoy your other work.

I know how you feel. The first time I saw my X fucked by another man, I was so excited I almost cum in my pants. Later I either laid there and watched them or sometimes she would have them over just before I came home from work, that way I had fresh cream pies. Either way, we loved each other and we loved what we were doing. She passed a few years ago with liver cancer. I'll never find another like her.

Well developed and HOT!

How much perversion can you stand ??

Even the "masterpiece" commenter just before me knows subconsiously that when she is with another guy she is telling 'you' "FUCK YOU!".

His comment reads like his great thrill is having her tell him to fuck off!

Yep, sounds about right..........

I AM SO GLAD I CAME ACROSS THIS STORY!

It is a distinct kind of pleasure when you watch your wife with another man. It is different than when you fuck you yourself. When you sense that she enjoys the other man's dick inside her and is happy, you too are happy, you are in 7th Heaven!

This story really hit my buttons, hard. I've never been able to get my wife to agree, but had a girlfriend long time ago that not only loved pulling trains but being watched. I loved sloppy seconds and I believe cum is the best lubricant for all sex, masturbation, eating pussy, and intercourse. Look forward to reading more of your stories.

I loved the story. Very hot, quite the digital page turner!

What pisses me off is all the anons claiming they don't like the thought and I would be sick to read this. There's a description right below the title, don't read if its not your forte!

If there is more to this story I would love to read it!

CarnalProdigy@gmail.com

Iam a married man of 40 years and i would love to watch another person fuck my wife.When i think about it i get hard as a rock.I like to think of his dick sliding in and out of her pussy and the look on her face when he slides it in.

Only thing I can say is that there a lot of sickos reading on this site. I choked on the first sentence and I'm moving on, before the filth rubs off.

That is all

I am absolutely thrilled that the wife in this story got a grip and put a stop to her husbands unbridled fantasys. I very much enjoyed the descriptive sex, and how you ended it exactly where I could feel the dirtyness and the passion without hating the wife. However, the husband was a clueless moron.

My wife let my nephew fuck her on his birthday, he was 17. I told her it was okay cause he was family and it went on 2-3 times a week for three years. A couple of times he brought a friend as well while I was at work. She told me about a year after he had moved away. She had several affairs after that and six years later we divorced. She remarried and she said that she cheated on her husband a lot. the cheating was better than regular sex.

just reading such stories will never let you have those intense, unique feelings that one experiences when its really happening. unless you do it, you won't know it.

we have done this together many times now and today, I may certainly be labelled as the proverbial "slut wife", thanks to my husband's encouragement.

If this happened to me in real life I would love it, even locked in chastity.

Hottest story ever. Thanks

I'm surprised she didn't have you eat her out after Jack fucked her. I dated married women when I was in college also. The first time I ever fucked Elaine in front of Jeremy, her husband, SHE made him come over and eat my semen out of her swollen, oozing vagina! I immediately got hard again seeing her pull his face tight against her slimy cunt and actually hump his face...LOL I was immediately ready to fuck again. She took one look at me and said something like, "I think someone enjoyed seeing his cum slurped out of my vagina.....HUH?

Next episode have Kathy 'make' you eat her out after she fucks another boyfriend.

One cannot digest the idea of getting his wife fucked in front of him. Only a man with sick mind and dreams would think of such an obsession.

You guys who comment about men not wanting to watch are not paying attention to reality.

What do you think swinging is all about? Threesomes?....

Millions of videos of people watching and participating in groups to deny that husbands and wives are not included in these activities, enjoying watching their spouses enjoy themselves with others.

Too much too soon:

The kid and the couple have known each other for too long to expect the kid is going to tell anyone. The couple trusts him. They let him into their bedroom when she was undressed. AND She made him promise.

He is going to be way too interested in doing it again.

He is NOT going to tell anyone.

He is NOT going to bring strangers to the house.

She is NOT going to let them in knowing it could result in public shame, and possible blackmail.

Better:

Fix the time line. The kid should arrive earlier, about 11. He was rejected, went to a bar, got home and everyone was gone, and the spare key was missing.

The couple was starting to arouse each other, so she was already horny. And the adrenaline from the interruption will increase her excitement.

The couple had had only a couple of drinks in the evening. Too much alcohol makes everyman unable to perform. Even kids with more than enough hormones.

The night results in only one fucking from the kid. And then he is too drunk and exhausted, and falls to sleep on the couch.

In the morning she is not going to do this again. She is going to be a bit hung-over, and will want to be quiet and think about it all.

The kid snuck out early to get to work.....

Over the next few weeks the hubby and wife talk about the experience and fuck like rabbits. The relationship with the kid is a bit different. But similar to before. He visits. They all talk about what happened. But the wife says not again. To both of them.

The husband notices the wife is more relaxed.

Eventually he learns that the kid has been visiting. And the details of encounters can be told.

The wife should orgasm on the first night with the kid.

Fur shur: Forget the BBC scenario.

SSeems to me it has to do with perceiving spouse (wife) as being desireable, i.e. desired by others. It also is a medium fora reverse kind of transference where Hubby is able to assume responsibility for the increased sexual pleasure the wife experienced. It is similar for the wife as well as she is sought and ravaged by one or more men. Her pleasure is more direct. Many women experience the loss of control in these stories as welcome freedom from the controlling societal presures (and double standard), where unlike men,women are expected to be prudish and uninterested in sexuality or whores and sluts. There are many other angles to this mess... Better ideas are welcome!!!

I can't understand a man wanting to see his wife Fuck someone else,it not normal to me. The story is very hot and writing is great. I just don't get how this would really happen in a loving relationship. The husband would have to be a complete idiot to allow that to happen. It would always end up with a broke marriage

Very hot. But then you knew that.

... "strong erythematic pulses"?

reluctant hotwife tales.Loved it. 5*

how a husband can get excited about his wife having sex with another man.

My wife has a regular lover and I watch them most of the times. Nothing turns me on more than that.

You did it again. A fully filled out story with great sex and emotional truth. Having the husband be bi would be different but not necessarily better. As many do, I love to guide my sweet wife's lover's hard dick into her wet and hungry pussy. Watching and participating are great in my book.

Having watched my wife fuck other guys and then fucking her cum filled pussy I know what you felt like. I don't care what others may say Or think. It's hot and it's fun.

It was anice story and I liked each word of it. I totally agree with you as you say " I have to say it improved mine and my wife's sex lives more than anyone could ever imagine. ", as I also have same opinion.

I was thrilled when I learned that my wife was fucking another guy. Her cunt was stretched by his thicker, 2 1/2 inches wide, cock and I loved the way she felt when I fucked her.

This story has to be real. It's so real life. It's even uncomfortable at some parts. I've been in scenes where almost this same sort of thing happened. It's awkward but then turns out ok. I liked this story a lot.

having your neighbor, right in front of you , f*&k your wife and say

" I have to say it improved mine and my wife's sex lives"

is repulsive, disgusting, and sick.

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and enjoyed it but I thought I would mention it being on another site in case the author wanted to know

It’s very well written and is more believable than most of the stories here.

I discovered it only because someone who “favored” a story I wrote, also “favored” this story. I like mother son incest fiction where the mother gives her young son a break and shows him how to please a woman. The problem I had is that I didn’t want to make the father dead, a bad guy or a fool. So, I had him be aware that his wife and son were fooling around. I toned down that aspect by having the father not wanting to actually watch. I also rationalized that his wife having sex with their son was less promiscuous than having it with another man since she loved her son and had a long term relationship with him.

The aspects of this story that made me like it in spite of the subject were:

1. The wife was drunk and was setup by her husband

2. The husband liked it more than the wife

3. When the wife was sober, she put an end to it

4. It was made very clear to the kid that he could never tell anyone and he understood

5. The kid knew how lucky he was and stopped immediately when he was told to

6. You could see the husband and wife returning to a monogamous relationship

7. A young man has a great time with an older woman. Always a plus.

Some of the comments here suggest that the things the wife admitted to at the end were true. They obviously were not. The wife made it very clear several times that no one was to know she gave him a hand job. There is no way the kid would invite his friends over for gang bang and ruin a good thing.

Thanks again for a great story.

biography time

1* for first and last time

I was able to watch my wife fuck my best friend one night. It was one of the most erotic sights I've ever witnessed. He was in from out of town and spending the night with us. Before he moved, the two of them teased each other a lot and she became more than friendly with him. We spend the evening drinking and then I went to bed. She came in and dressed in her night gown leaving off her bra and panties and then went back to help him make up his bed on our couch. I woke up and discovered she was not in bed and went looking for her. The lights were out but we have a fire in our fire place and it allowed me to see the two of them on the floor engaged in fucking. I watched from the kitchen as they fucked for a good ten minutes and then he climaxed in her. I silently moved back to our bed and pretended to wake when she crawled in bed. I then asked if she enjoyed fucking him. After some hesitation, she admitted that she did. Her pussy was a real mess. She is a "squirter" and with his added cum she was incredibly wet. Then we spend the next hour fucking. We later discussed the incident and I agreed that she could continue to fuck him if she would come home and tell me what happened. They continued to meet for about a year. During that time she gave him oral sex and he even fucked her ass. I loved hearing about their love making and we always ended up fucking.

This story has to be one of the best on Lit. As a woman who has had sex outside of marriage, totally without guilt, and my husbands knowledge it is fantastic. We are not swingers nor do we desire to be swingers. My sex partners were close friends, also married and the sex was for fun and at the right time in the right place. The most important aspect is honesty. My husband and I always tell each other of our "adventures" and have often participated in each others trysts.

Best to you, JuLee

I just completed re-reading, for the nth time, all your stories. Which one did I love best? Well, actually, I loove them all, but yes this one "Wife's Unusual First Time" , for me, is a .great first one, as it "prepares" me for the rest of them. Wish you had followed them up with sequels. Great eroticism, man.

Loved that part where the neighbor first worked his thick head into her. I've experienced that same moment with a past wife and have to admit it was very arousing. Don't know if this story is true or not but I can verify that such a thing can happen even when the wife is 'reluctant.'

I love this story! Read it with my wife and we both thought it was great!

I also had fantasy for my dear wife sona fucked by college students,but she never agree for that. We together read this story,and thank you for this excellent script. Sona becomes very excited for getting fucked by huge young cocks. My fantasy is turns to become realone soon. Thanks

Thank You! You just gave th is old slightly bi man the hottest story I ever read or imagined. Not sure I could suck another man's cream from her pussy or his cock but in THIS SITUATION.....I would gladly do so, repeatedly!

Thank you ever so much!

wannabe quack 0*

Well written, and an interesting, unique story to boot. Enjoyed it much, and gave it 5 stars. Keep up the good work!

Nothing more needs to be said.

Whatever the highest rating was I gave to your story. Absolutely fantastic

I love watching my wife getting fucked better if he has a very large cock and doesn't mind me sucking his cock too

thanks for sharing a great story.

needs to be in "my true life stories" pervert

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That was purely natural... Keep up your good work man!! Really a nice read in a beautiful evening!! :D

Some husbands really do enjoy sharing, some wives do too.

garbage out 0 *s

Wow ! I gave the old lady 2 hot beef injections with cream while reading the story.

One thing in my favor is that I had her tubes snipped and it saves money on condoms or birth control pills and no chance of "rug rats" appearing after 9 months..

I had a similar experience with a neighbor a couple of years ago. He came to the house after his old lady locked him out after he came home after cocking around.

He took my wife twice that night. The last time while he was putting it to her, I sneaked up and took him in his ass! Boy was he surprised, and it felt good to me!

he should have sucked toms cum from her cunt that first night in the bath room. A very hot stort otherwise

I like everyone of your stories that I've read so far. While they maintain a certain theme to them, they are all very different. Great details!

I gave it 5 stars ;)