All Comments on 'Wifey's Work Becomes Play Pt. 01'

Don't write anymore

Though the syntax may be a little stilted, I guess that really should be how to not write.

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For example, by the third grade, everyone -- EVERYONE -- should know that the pronoun I is ALWAYS capitalized.

Is this? This site is stooping awful low to allow something like this to be posted. Did you even go to school to learn basic writing.

Lots more please

Interesting writing style. More like a script but I felt like I was right there in person.

Please write more!

Dear Sirs / Madams-

I realize that my writing was not the norm here- I wrote it more, as someone mentioned, like a script or dialogue than standard prose. My use of the "i" was only in reference to the protagonist, who is submissive.

I have modified my writing style to be more consistent with standard writing practices. So- there!

Why would anyone take a partner cheating on then or wish for a loving partner to do that . I would be so out the door or they would. Well written but sorry makes me feel sad .

And am excited to read part 2

His slacks weren't tight, but i could see a large bulge.

Gay/homosexual mentally ill cuck writer showing off his sad pathetic life here for all to chuckle at.

I find it comical that iameasel ventures to the Trans & Crossdresser topics and then has a hissyfit re a gay storyline.

Like a vegetarian complaining that the steakhouse serves meat!