All Comments on 'Wild'

I loved the story !!

Awesome

I love your style.

Back after a long hiaturs. Please do continue this delicious story and soon.

great story i loved it please continue and write a few more chapters

nice story but certain things could be elongated for better the relationship is to be handled in away that it doesn't seem to be runing towarsd end

WHAT HAPPENED???????????????

great story i hope there comes more

goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

One of your better story theme.This has plenty of seductive buildup which is the best part about erotica. So what happens next?

I love this story but why didn't you finish it. I would have rated you a 5++++++++ for a hot orgasmic ending.

Superb !!!!!! Both me and my wife absolutely loved the story .... however u havent completed it. Awesome buildup to the sexual tension... keep going !! Yeh dil maange more !!

i love the slow build up. i hope there is more to come. it all sounds so real. keep up the good work .

that was really great erotic job , i enjoy and couldn't get enough of it .

keep going .

u have really built up the tempo as is the case in actual life. how a man builds up his eagerness stealthily and goes in for the kill. WELL REALLY GREAT WRITING u should really think of going commercial. meet some publishers and i definitely feel u could rake in the moooooooolah.

ALL THE BEST

regards

kumar

really liked it!

my daughter started high school.she started looking at me with lust in her eyes.my wife noticed it also&she said girls now days want to have sex with their dads its the new generation.daughter and her mom were having a close talk.they were looking at me.i was in bed with my wife&my daughter came into the room naked.my wife told her get in bed with your dad I will tell you what to do.it was a wild night.we all sleep naked with eachother.my wife is teaching her how have bi sex.daughter really went for it.they yell&scream when they finish my daughter jumps me.she loves sex with me &her mom.daughter is going to have a great sex life she is going to have sex with men&women.she is going to have a wild life&have fun doing it.

Slow to develop, but managed to keep the reader's attention.