All Comments on 'Wild Child Ch. 01'

by TxRad

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Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 14 years ago
Looking forward to Chapters 2 through XXX

A good start to what appears to be a great series of chapters about a young virgin and a (dirty old) man. There's something about 18-year-old women--they just don't realize how sexy they are, or the effect their sexiness has on men. I think you captured that very well in this story. Thanks for sharing.

catman71catman71over 14 years ago
greeaat

great start do not rush just let it flow please

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
So Far

So good, Tex. Just keep Uncle Rick reminded of what is at stake.

LokiKarameikosLokiKarameikosabout 14 years ago
A really good story

This is the beginning to a real good story, once I started reading it I had to continue until the end. Not many stories capture my interest that way.

Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story, lousy editing

It's a great story and I'm looking forward to later chapters BUT you wrote 'keep my reputation in tacked' when you meant 'keep my reputation intact'

islandicislandicover 11 years ago
There is so much more

There is so much more potential in this. Pls continue.

MeltnmoldMeltnmoldover 10 years ago

Dangerous.

Delicious.

Wow.

More, More, More.........

MacHardyMacHardyalmost 3 years ago

Suspense is killing me!

bobhardcastlebobhardcastle23 days ago

Glad that it went where it went, and not where most of the stories on here would have gone.

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75 year old guy that worked in the oil fields of Texas for 41 years and writes because he has to..... Nudist, loves the outdoors, ex stock car racer, likes to have fun... If you're not happy then you're doing something wrong...

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