by TxRad
A good start to what appears to be a great series of chapters about a young virgin and a (dirty old) man. There's something about 18-year-old women--they just don't realize how sexy they are, or the effect their sexiness has on men. I think you captured that very well in this story. Thanks for sharing.
This is the beginning to a real good story, once I started reading it I had to continue until the end. Not many stories capture my interest that way.
Keep up the good work.
It's a great story and I'm looking forward to later chapters BUT you wrote 'keep my reputation in tacked' when you meant 'keep my reputation intact'
There is so much more potential in this. Pls continue.
Glad that it went where it went, and not where most of the stories on here would have gone.