All Comments on 'Wild Rhoda'

Love the dialog. But is it Rhoda or Rhona?

Steve

Been a while since I’ve seen one of yours up here! Welcome back!

I like the story, but I find that it is sometimes difficult to determine which character is talking when you write the dialogue to their conversations. It is also confusing enough with the Nicholas, Nico, Nick angle, but when you ad in Rick and Rico occasionally it is doubly so. Also, the title is Wild Rhoda, but she is Rhona predominantly throughout the story. It makes it a little disconcerting to read. I encourage you to continue the story as the characters are developing nicely and there are many story arcs still to thresh out. Everything I mentioned above is easily corrected and does little to detract from an otherwise enjoyable reading experience.

Great story welcome back we have missed you

James UK

Rhona/Rhoda, Donald/Dougal.

Pick a name & stick with it.