by barry240646
Wonderful story! We should all be so lucky as to have "magic" come into our lives. This was several grades above a shag story. Please continue! You have a great feel for developing a story without making it so long that the reader begins to lose interest.
Welcome change from the shag story, love the back drop.. don’t know geography of Scotland so can’t comment on it nevertheless loved the flow.
Very nice story, it flows well and proves that us older guys know how to please a woman better than the youngsters. I really enjoyed it.
May the geographers drown in their smug righteousness while the rest of us enjoy a good story.
Ignore the critics. You have crafted a very beautifully written story. Really enjoyed it.
Delightful. So well written it's really nit picking to note that, as she had (regrettably) shaved her mons it couldn't be hirsute any more, could it? Oh,wasn't Something Stupid a duet with both Frank and Nancy Sinatra?
5*+
Frank and Nancy recorded it, but Frank also recorded it on an album on his own.
My mistake on hirsute - will correct
This was a great story to read. I loved the doe of it. I hope they love each other a long time.
One minor detail. The "new rijksmuseum" is a documentary. The real Rijksmuseum is from 1885. Not so new anymore😉 But thanks anyway that you like our country😊
Agreed, built in 1885. A renovation of the south wing of the museum, also known as the 'fragment building' or 'Philips Wing', was completed in 1996, the same year that the museum held its first major photography exhibition featuring its extensive collection of 19th-century photos. In December 2003, the main building of the museum closed for a major renovation. It is the result of this renovation I was referring to and still want to see myself.
A wonderful story of a far away place (at least to me, here in Florida) with real emotions! Thanks for writing this.