All Comments on 'Wilderness Paradise Pt. 05'

I feel the story coming to its conclusion and can't wait to read how it ends. You are a master story teller. This should have been a book! Please don't keep us waiting. I need to know how it ends! Great job.

Don't keep us waiting to long for the ending of the story, this has been a great story and u are good story teller and writter.

Keep it up this is good stuff

BUT YOU NEED TO FINISH TELLING THE STORY. I AM SORRY I DO NOT LIKE WAITING.

i was loving this story but childish cliffhanger plot devices have ruined it for me, save it for childrens saturday matinee not adult literature

Agree with the last comment. You cliffhangers just gets worse and worse. Sounds like you are a writer of an american soap opera or something.

I hope we don't have to wait too long for the finish. I am looking forward to another chapter or three or four...

Really good story. Cant wait for the next part.

I'm a fan now. I love the ebb and flow. Great stuff. I can't belive that I have only one more episode ... please write a few more chapters!

This is a rather long story but I'm really enjoying it. Love the action and the sexual tension. Your writing is really good and the wordsmithing is remarkable - I've had to pull out the old dictionary! Thank you.

breathtaking...